Reviews for Stepping into the Sun
nchi-wana chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
I also liked that you didn't give him a name. This was a wonderful little one-shot about someone wanting to see a world that is beyond the one he lived in and knew. Good job!
Neko chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
I really liked this piece. I think the vagueness and the lack of name actually adds to it. There is so much for this noble to see, and he was in so much pain that he probably wouldn't have seen all the little details, but to him the things that we humans take for granted seemed so wondrous. I understand what you mean about D, I don't think he's suicidal either, so much as he is tired, his life is a constant struggle after all.
Scorpiogirl888 chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
That was great! Your wording makes you see what you are writing. Your an excellent writer.
g1rldraco7 chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
That was really good. Beside the small details i it, you captured the moment perfectly. Wish I could do that :/