Reviews for The Beginnings
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25
Good but he could have proposed or it could have been continued.
WaltonPrairieGirl chapter 1 . 6/10/2016
Love it! :)
mjenten chapter 1 . 4/24/2016
oh! a much better ending! i know it has been 4 almost five years since you posted this, but it is till as exciting and enticing to read! you are a very gifted writer, hope you have not stop. although i'm stuck on all things j/s and still catching up since finding the site in 2014. you are such a group of very cerebral writers, a God given gift! thank you so much for sharing it.
bgjk5272 chapter 1 . 9/17/2014
good story...
BooksDon'tJustTellStories chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
Thank you for continuing the most annoying scene in the history of annoying scenes! ;) You did a great job.
mjentrn chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
a perfect episode/ending! you just wrote gently to a crescendo! great writing . thank you so much. more fluffs maybe as valentine approaches? always grateful for your gift of imagination/writing.
Zoja chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
Mmmm..! I absolutely love it! I would love such an ending after the episode! It would be amazing if it finished this way, Jack taking Sue home (home with a much more meaning...), after they kissed and they would give us this promise that they will be together... *sigh*
fanka77 chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Awww... How sweet! This is definitely something that I would like to see after this episode. Shame it didn't happened...
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! Very sweet!
MLLMLL chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Une fin comme celle ci j'adore... Je prends la lecture de vos histoires.
Gremlinpugs chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
As usual, this was a great story and I can so see that this was what Jack wanted to say before Myles interrupted them.

Please keep up the great stories. Thank you for these stories.
71cottes chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
nice history very well written

I think that everybody wants to see Jack and Sweat together at the end and to declare feelings finally them
Huck05 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
That Was a great little Extension to the last episode, But You could of kept going it would of been all right with me. Lol. This would've been a good Story in it's own. Thank You!
dawnpritchard66 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
cheliosfan chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
I love it! I wish it would of ended like this or at least Jack and Sue together. Great Job :)