Reviews for Immaturity At Its Finest
animefangirl2014 chapter 26 . 2/21
Oh! This is just WAY. TOO. AWESOME! But are you going to make Marnie and Nathan leave like he does in the show and have their kid elsewhere or something else? Either way its AMAZING and I can't wait for more XD
Chaospossum chapter 26 . 2/6
Oh my godddddddddddddddddddd that was so good. I am in love with this story! Seriously, none of the characters are too OOC and Marnie is just so damn relatable. Please, please update soon. (Even though I realise that this hasn't been updated in three years) please! I love it so much. (I sound so whiny tbh but still. It's because this story is so good.)
Chaospossum chapter 10 . 2/6
This chapter was absolutely devastating. I love your writing style and I can't help but feel what Marnie feels. You've written this so damn well and I am so excited to see what you have in store for Nathan and Marnie next. Keep up the good work! Xx
Guest chapter 26 . 10/23/2015
If you ever update again Marnie should stay till end of season 3 cause she leaves to bail Nathan out who went to Vegas alone confident he could get money and return but doesn't go his way and i don't believe it was ever mentioned when Nathan called Simon
Poppylucy45 chapter 26 . 10/12/2015
How come you gave up on this story it was great but it could have been amazing xx
hellspam chapter 26 . 10/1/2015
I like what you did with this story I hope you start updating again
hellspam chapter 3 . 9/30/2015
Ive read the chapters and so far I really enjoy it and I agree Nathan acts like a dickhead but his got a nicer side you don't see often I mean he gave up immortality in Christmas episode to help that chick and her unborn baby also I live ocs power
person chapter 4 . 9/23/2014
I really love this story! It's awesome. One question though: didn't Marnie steal her step-dad's car? I apologize for nit-picking, and I can understand if it was the type of thing where she stole the keys, but this detail was slightly confusing. Nevertheless, I absolutely love your story so far!
JenRiley16 chapter 26 . 8/19/2014
My favorite part about fanfictions is the chase. Honestly, that's what I start a story for - the chase. I'm no longer satisfied when the two main love interests get together because most times, then they're just together. It falls into monotony. There's no more winning her over, or him slowly noticing how much he loves her laugh, and her learning the way he has his coffee. Even if a pair of people are in a relationship, the courting part never has to be over, I don't think. It never has to stop being exciting and new. I preface with all this because I want to tell you that you have held my attention. When I thought the chase was over once Nathan and Marnie were together, I very quickly realized it wasn't. So the chase was on again, and it still is. Thank you for writing this, I really love it. I hope you update again.
BladeAuror chapter 26 . 7/25/2014
Usually I don't like pregnancy stories, but this is so fucking cute! Like, seriously, I did lot's of 'ooowwns' while reading it. I loved it, really.
Ahsilaa chapter 26 . 2/26/2014
Damn that was a by twost - the pregnancy thing. I really hope you update soon but ate they still going to go to Las Vegas ?
love rosie3 chapter 26 . 1/7/2014
Nice story. I hope you update you soon :-)
January Raines chapter 26 . 9/2/2013
Update soon please! :)
dustdancingintheflickerlight chapter 26 . 6/18/2013
This fic is unbelievably good! I read it all in one sitting instead of doing college work but it was worth it, you're a brilliant writer!
I really hope you update. I'd love to see Nathan tell his dad especially, just to see his reaction and things. Real good :-)
Lalaaaa chapter 26 . 5/18/2013
To, jus dropping in to say that I love this story. It's one of the best Nathan/OC fanfics I've read and I hope you update it soon!
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