Reviews for Charlie shakes ants on deck kickin it with jessie
imamoomoo chapter 1 . 4/4
What kind of story is this? I've read a story without "quotation marks" before! I think I would understand if u used paragraphs and other stuff. Just sayin'!
LiveLoveLife13 chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
I'm confused
icewolf14 chapter 4 . 3/20/2013
Things I love:
Story line
Characters

Things that need improvement:
Spelling
Punctuation
Grammar
Paragraphs
Dialogue ("quotation marks")
Author's Notes (separate from story with bold, italics, or a line)

All of these things make a better story! :)
Amelia Jackson chapter 3 . 2/4/2013
You call this a story?
Amelia Jackson chapter 4 . 2/4/2013
WHAT THE HELL!
Guest chapter 4 . 12/26/2012
U can't have a baby and a husband at 18!
OOOOKKKAYYY chapter 4 . 12/10/2012
what the heck? this story is reaalllly short, however i do like the concept! if this huge crossover was real i would just about die lol All in all, it does require a lot more work... (no hate intended)
Guest chapter 4 . 11/24/2012
This is. Good! Please right more!
Swiftgleek chapter 4 . 10/20/2012
The plot was Pre good and I thought I'd try it but the story was a bit confusing. xx I don't want to be mean but you should try and improve your writing and maybe review.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/2/2012
confusion
Opal chapter 4 . 7/30/2012
Awesome!
nina777 chapter 3 . 7/25/2012
Please make new chapters
belle6900 chapter 4 . 7/17/2012
im having such a hard time following ur writing style no offence u just need 2 work on it
Guest chapter 4 . 7/3/2012
this story is so stupid plez don't update you'll be doing everyone a favour
Guest chapter 4 . 6/30/2012
OMG! OMG! PLEASE CONTINUE! THIS IS SO STINKIN' INTERESTING! PLEASE CONTINUE! I'M DYING FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER! HAPPY SUMMER! God bless! XOXO, Anonymous
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