Reviews for up and down and all around
autumn midnights chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Awwww, this is incredibly sweet! You characterized them very well, especially Teddy since, as it's from his POV, we see a little bit more of him. I like how this is told in several little moments, and the dialogue between them in the third section and the last was so adorable. I love this pairing, and I think that you handled it very well. I like how Victoire asked Teddy if he would marry her, and then he was just '...', that was perfect. This was so beautifully -written, also, and the whole thing flowed extremely well. I didn't notice any mistakes, either, and I love how their first kiss is in James' bedroom and when he comes in, he ignores the fact that they were kissing. This is such a nice romantic oneshot, and I really enjoyed reading this. Great job!
whatthehell fairy chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
Beautiful. Loved this -heart-
Just the Wind chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
Oh, when a poet writes a story!

Beautiful prose. Wonderful, amazing prose. With dialog that is unbelievable perfect (which, in fact, lies in the believability of it all).

Incredible.
Morghen chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Asdfghjkl, I don't write them much anymore, but I will always have a soft spot for Lily/Teddy!

I love the way you write them, too. You showed how they both had feelings for each other, but did not act immediately on their feelings. I like that because it makes their relationship a lot more believable, to me.

I also loved your descriptions of Teddy and how his hair and eyes changed according to his moods. He is soooo cute! *luvz Teddy*

The whole style of this fic was wonderful, by the way. I loved how the scenes switched almost effortlessly and definitely perfectly. The flow was just perfect!

:)

"He could not help it. But he could pretend and he could grab Victoire's hand and dance with her"

I really liked that part for some reason. It just showed how desperate he was to not come to terms with his feelings for Lily.

Great work as always!

:D

-Morghen
keep my issues drawn chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Should. Not. Be. Liking. This.

I ship TedToire, Middy, you know you ship TedToire.

/but this was amazing and beautiful/

I ship TedToire!

/but this was written so well/

I've told you, I ship TedToire!

/but you kinda like Tily now/

Maybe... NO! TedToire!

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Loooooooooo! I should /not/ be shipping this as hard as I now am. I ship THIS Tily, this one only, okay?

I loved this, the language, the plot, the feelings, Lily's 18th birthday, and the sad look in her eyes. I loved the way this was written, you write so well!

Just. I loved it, okay?

And I should totally not be favouriting because I ship TedToire...

Creys, Looooooooooo,, I love this!