|Reviews for Broken Chains|
| ThomasNealy chapter 38 . 3/1
The beginning was a little bumpy to me but after his rebirth so to speak to became much better to me. As it is I would like to see a sequel to this story.
| ThomasNealy chapter 8 . 2/28
I find it hard to believe that he had not jerked off before. He was a teen male after all.
| Drakosis7734 chapter 8 . 2/27
| Drakosis7734 chapter 1 . 2/27
| doubledamn chapter 38 . 2/25
Nice, this was just beautiful. Someone's doing a re-write of this using World of Warcraft as the basis and the Lich King instead of Sidious. Might be good, but from what I saw they just replaced names and locations barely altering the story at all. (I forget the name so don't ask for it).
As this was a fantastic story and Harry's Ritual essentially made him Immortal (possibly), as well may have made his girls immortal as well given the whole 'bonds of magic' marriage thing, could you do a bonus chapter or a one-shot epi-epilogue where Harry, Luna and Hermonie wind up back at the Galaxy? Either viewing the remnants of the lost Galactic Civilisation, or seeing new species that hae arisen from the ashes of the old?
| doubledamn chapter 25 . 2/24
This is simply fantastic, the only description I could think of when you were telling us about Harry's granddad, was some old Scottish fisherman with pipe saying "he had piss in vinegar in veins, young'un!"
Or something like that.
| Engrprince chapter 38 . 2/14
I could not like this story due to the Scyzophrenic, slutty bitch that was Hermione. She had at least four different personalities it was crazy. She slept with a Harry lookalike and became his personal whore without knowing him. Then she pissed all over Harry’s memory. Too bad the premise and plot was good, but bad epilogue. I loved Luna, but I could not stand Hermione.
| Hobbyfarmer chapter 38 . 2/14
I enjoyed the story except for Hermione and the epilogue
| Hobbyfarmer chapter 24 . 2/14
I am loving this story again. too bad chapters 15 through 21 made it difficult. Thanks for the story.
| Hobbyfarmer chapter 23 . 2/14
I now understand the unbelievable character change in Hermione. It was the avenue that Luna could join the marriage. Luna had made this story enjoyable again.
| Hobbyfarmer chapter 22 . 2/14
One of the problems I have with Fanfic is things must make sense. Harry having super power must make sense here it does. Harry being dark must make sense here it does, though a little more of old Harry should have showed up if he is half of him. What does not make sense is Hermione. Her personality change does not make sense. Here undying love for Harry in the first 14 chapters does not make sense based on how she felt prior to the Veil according to her flashback. That she would love the new Harry more makes ZERO sense to Hermione's Character because there is so little of the old Harry left. This story is OK but it lacks believable characters. If Harry is Half his old self then they way he treats the ministry five makes no sense. The story itself is entertaining, but the characters are unreasonable.
| Engrprince chapter 20 . 2/14
Hermione's and idiot and Harry's a jackass. Hermione claims to have loved Harry except for one flaw, but was willing to give up on him for that but not death. Ron does not have that flaw but many more yet she would pursue him. This new Harry is a Jackass and not anything like the old Harry but Hermione loves him more. She is stereo typical bitch who loves the bad boy and not the good guy. I probably will finish this because even though your characters suck I like the story.
| Hobbyfarmer chapter 19 . 2/13
I am enjoying this story but it is difficult. Harry is not likable in fact if he dies again I would not morn. Even a dark Harry could be likeable. I love you Hermione and am looking forward to Luna.
| Hobbyfarmer chapter 15 . 2/13
I have loved this story up to this point. Hermione was great, but midway through this chapter she becomes a heartless bitch in her memory that almost makes her love for Harry make no sense at all. For this to be believable for me I need to forget her thoughts during the drive because her feeling then does not match the previous 14 chapters.
| Dreamhare97 chapter 23 . 2/2
I normally fav stories once I've read all chapters posted, same goes for reviews, but I had to make an exception for this chapter. I nearly died holding the laughter in, since I'm supposed to be asleep as it's past 1. Who'd have thought vulgar language would have been so hilarious? Your Xeno cracks me up! My goodness! Loving this story like all your others, despite not being a big star wars fan or even watching all the films. Keep up the excellent work!