|Reviews for The Heir to Panem|
| c3lia chapter 10 . 11/5
Lovely story! Very well-written!
| c3lia chapter 1 . 11/3
This is THE BEST first chapter of a Hunger Games fanfic I've ever read. Awesome (in a crazy way) plot! Great dialogues. Lovely descriptions. Very in-character thoughts. Incredibly good blend between dialogue/descriptions/characters' thoughts! Awesome!
Tks for taking the time to write and share this story here with us!
Hugs from Portugal, Célia
| Ellae chapter 10 . 9/10
Honestly the most far fetched part of this whole thing is that Peeta could pick up career baking so quickly but I guess he's a functional baker not the extraordinaire of so many fics and/orI guess a prince's education & discipline may exceed min
I enjoyed Johanna and Finnick's roles in this.
This story was a bit frustrating that 1) Peeta was so truly kind hearted he couldn't even suspect his father; all children must go through a growing pains period with their parents,;and and he was also so oblivious to the clear terror of e regime around him, incl his object of affection 2) that Katniss could so easily forget the danger she was in at every single moment to even play with this cruel dictator's son and then still cultivate a romance. I'm with her mother on how stupid that was. And I'm disappointed that Peeta isn't writing treatises or advising more regularly, as Aristotle observed, the most virtuous often avoid politics the most, failing to balance personal and political morality; Machiavelli wrote that knowledgeable and wise men have a duty to advise governments who are attempting t reach equity for its citizens.
You have a talent for drawing readers into these brief but detailed universes.
| PurpleYin chapter 10 . 4/10
I quite enjoyed this fic, I thought it was a very interesting AU concept.
| Hermiann chapter 10 . 2/5
I loved this story. It was a very interesting and well written AU. Great characters, great plot, all around solid fanfiction. Thank you for writing this!
| AfterTheEpilogue chapter 1 . 2/3
This is super interesting, an excellent AU.
| Lauralol chapter 10 . 1/30
Your stories are really nice and beautiful to read
| GoPinkLion chapter 10 . 1/2
Excellent story! I couldn't stop reading! It sucked me right in!
| babythor chapter 10 . 12/24/2016
Finnick and Prim live!
I love how you translated Peeta's innocence/naivete and his miscomprehension about potential ramifications from the books to the scale of damage that similar well-meant mistakes would create as the president's son. Katniss' emotions and conflict were great. She really did fall in love with Peeta. That love coming into conflict with her love for her family and her inability to explain to Peeta the real danger and desperation of living out in the Districts, it was very dynamic. I'm in love with their love.
All of the subtle interactions between Snow and Katniss were masterful and chilling. He came at every subversive angle to break Katniss, like having Enobaria training Katniss' personality right out of her under the guise of a governess. I about gagged when he made her call him Dad.
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/17/2016
You are a genius ! I love your story.
I was so glad when I was reading this story.
Katniss and Peeta are very charming in your story.
I Ilike that!
Thank you so much!
| Depudor chapter 10 . 11/21/2016
I read your story Bliss, which I loved, and one of the reviewers there said this was their favorite story of yours, so I came over to read this one. I have to say, I found it hilarious that they have such similar plots: Peeta and Katniss meet when he rescues her from having sex with a disgusting man for money. Then she and Peeta end up forced by adults into marriage. I originally assumed you're British, because you use a couple words that don't exist in American English, but then part of me wonders if you're actually from a culture where arranged marriage is common. In Bliss you mention Delly also being in an arranged marriage. So... British English arranged marriage India? The anthropologist in me wants to know.
Also, something about this read like Frozen to me - all of the dignitaries coming to see Elsa when she's presented. Had you just seen Frozen?
| Yuuki Kuchiki chapter 9 . 10/12/2016
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| Amanthya chapter 10 . 10/9/2016
Sometimes I wish this *was* canon, I like it so much.
| Amanthya chapter 6 . 10/9/2016
I didn't catch, on my first couple of re-reads, that Snow rushes over to Peeta, that he smiles proudly at his birthday. Maybe some tiny sliver of his heart does care for his son. Idk if that makes him more or less detestable. : /