Reviews for Choices, Change and Challenges
Guest chapter 6 . 12/28/2015
What's ab eejit?
birdbrain987 chapter 12 . 4/30/2015
Just finished reading this. Really enjoyed it, thanks very much. If I had to criticise one thing, I would say that you lost the character of Aslan a bit in hos interactions with Anna, but on the whole it was a great read, thanks
DreamerDayjob chapter 12 . 3/4/2015
I absolutely loved this! You did a great job of merging the two parts of the story together. Wonderful story and adorable moments! DDxx
Amber and Ruby chapter 12 . 6/20/2014
I just wanted to tell you that I have really enjoyed reading this.
Dark-Enough-Conspiracy-Theory chapter 10 . 3/12/2014
ummm sorry to be a bum but another critique you said she was sixteen in this chapter yet at the start of this story she was seventeen. Bit confused
Dark-Enough-Conspiracy-Theory chapter 3 . 3/12/2014
umm in the first chapter you mention that she likes climbing tree's as a kid then in this chapter you write that she is afraid of heights honestly speaking, I say change the fright of heights because being a gymnast like she is she has to not be afraid of heights to achieve some of the things that gymnast's do. Sorry but otherwise I enjoy the book so far ;D
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 11 . 7/23/2013
loved it! great story.
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 10 . 7/23/2013
Great chapter:)
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 9 . 7/23/2013
aww little Peter blaming himself ahahaha.
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 8 . 7/23/2013
No you can't let her die!
She will survive I know..;)
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 7 . 7/23/2013
Aww that was so sweet!
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 6 . 7/23/2013
Loved it!
the almost kiss was good:)
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 5 . 7/23/2013
Great chapter, Peter is starting to warm up to her now:)
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 4 . 7/23/2013
Great chapter
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 3 . 7/23/2013
Liking it:)
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