|Reviews for Together forever|
| promocat chapter 2 . 12/11/2013
so sweet at the end! they deserve it
| Noirx chapter 2 . 12/11/2013
Though it turned a bit shoujo at the end, I can't say I'm not satisfied. Though usually I dislike sappy romance, your story really touched me. Thank you for writing this.
| AkatsukiAshe chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
I love this! It is amazing! :) You write so beautifully!
So emotional! :)
| irockyourworld123 chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
I loved it!it was adorable. Your writing style is awesome and is easy to follow keep it up!xD I hope to read more black butler fics In the futrue!33333 do your best and just be yourself when your writing i found it helps me write better story's..! XD love your work!
| RoxyLuv19 chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Hey there Black-servant )
Well, it's wonderful to find someone who loves writing as much as I do! Writing is my life and I too am an avid Author, I can tell you're very passionate about it so keep up the good work!
Now *ahem* This is a very cute, fluffy and emotional story lol. I felt really sad for Ciel when he misunderstood Sebastian's words- took them too seriosuly.
It's always important to allow your readers to feel what your characters are feeling and you did just that! I look forward to reading more from you in the future!
I shan't repeat what anyone else said as...er...it's already been said...yeah lol
Keep up the great work D
| promocat chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
i liked this very much-i hope you write more ciel & sebastian!
| Meko90 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
I like it...id prefer ur endin of kuro to the original cause u kno those die hard cielXsebby fangirls will make the ratings go through the roof...
| CherryFlavouredPoison chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
| DestinyItalia chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
I thought this was really cute! _ hmm.? a few tips, when writing a conversation leave spaces between each line a person says so that it doesn't look clumped or get confusing
example: Finally Sebastian lifted Ciel to his arms and again they just stood there a while looking each other.
"I love you Ciel." Sebastian said and placed another kiss to his beloved lips.
"I love you too." Ciel replied. When they lips departed Sebastian asked;
"Where shall we go now?"
"Any place is find as long as we're together so where ever we shall go promise that we'll be together…" Ciel replied with a quiet voice and then smiled to Sebastian. Sebastian gave Ciel an eskimo kiss and then jumped to the mist;
:) also don't be afraid to add more detail, the more the better! like instead of saying Sebastian thought something, actually write him thinking it.
example: Instead of- He really couldn't think very clearly what his master said. He only thought that his master didn't need him anymore and didn't wish to be with him anymore.
It could be revised as: Sebastian could not think very clearly on what his master had said. "Ciel does not need me anymore?..he does not wish to be with me?" he thought.
just a few tips I usually tell myself when I'm writing :) I'm also new here and am writing my first kuroshitsuji stories:3 feel free to check them out if you'd like:)
keep up the good work! _