Reviews for My Death: Myrtle's Story
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
I find it interesting that you chose Myrtle of all characters to focus on. It's nice to see a different version of the ending. I think you stayed in character as much as you could, even though a little bit of it is dramatic. Good story, thanks for writing it.
Andrew chapter 1 . 10/26/2015
I loved it, I love how you infected a new ending into the story, it shows a more tranquil position to where there death consists, an how his frightful death rejuvenated.
Chris from Nashville chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
The beginning was kind of choppy, but it doesnt say tha Myrtle is very educated so that might reflect her personality. I like the afterlife part, and how Gatsby finally learned that he couldnt relive the past. Great stuff