Reviews for The Death of the Savior of Olympus
AsylumEscapee368 chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
What the heck! it's really good, but Annabeth is just a bit OOC
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2016
Dead, dead everyone's dead.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2016
What the heck? Sorry, but im confused...?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
that was sad, and-I'm sorry- sucky
Annabeth J Cane chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
That was cool. Why dissent you finish it?
I would like to hear more.
Whut happens next?
Pikachupercyharryfirestar chapter 1 . 2/6/2014
LOL;(Poor Percy;(
BrightGreenNails chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Annabeth how DARE you!? YOU TOLD LUKE TO KILL PERCY AND DIDN'T CARE? YOU LITTLE CHIENNE! Sorry but I said it in a different language so DEAL WITH IT!

Oh and to the author:
Great story, I like it but I only hate Annabeth.
Annabeth chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
No offence, but I personally didn't like it. Annabeth would NEVER be so ignorant. She loves Percy, not Luke. However, it was a very creative spin on the series. Nice work. :l
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
Crazed King chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Not bad
Hopeful Smile chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
You just made me wallow in misery... Times like these need depressing stories. Nice one :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Leftover Meal chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
I like how you didn't give Annabeth a second chance! Because she didn't deserve one! ;)
SilverWolf329 chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Are you going to continue this? Like, they don't let Annabeth be reborn or something, and she has to live the rest of her afterlife trying to regain Percy and Luke's trust?
E.C Silence chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
The characters we too OOC, your writing needs to be clearer, there were some parts I didn't get. And it doesn't fit te profecy. It was either Percy died, and Kronos won, or the other way around. Over all, you need to work on your writing.
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