It makes sense why Erza isn't willing to go alone to Tower of Heaven alone this time since she is aware that with Itachi and Naruto defeating Jellal is not imposible.

good

Well, I liked it on the whole, just a little disappointed with the lost potential because it was so rushed. Instead of taking it easy, it was all so fast and full of time skips

Dude, what kind of shit was naruto's reasoning for kurama? Trying to convince kurama that the bijus were only sealed so the uchiha couldn't control them? And to say that as if the biju should be grateful for being locked up in a saddle, and having their power stolen and used for pointless wars? I don't even know if the naïve Naruto himself believes what he said

Wow, the battles are so disappointing. The battle against Pain was VERY easy, it was barely funny. You seem to have a tendency to make fights extremely short and simple. The writing in general is very rushed, not just the fight

man what a waste of my time. I don't really wanted to write a comment cuz I know it hurts but I hated your fic and the only reason I even read it cuz I did not have any other option. your powerscaling is shit, just like your english, just like your pacing, just like you changing the emotional scenes in the matter of just few lines

at first I was going to rant about naruto being kicked so easily that he has to use kyuubi chakra to win but then I remembered that this is pre sage mode naruto who like literally won every fight cuz of kyuubi

Fucking useless that’s the best word to describe Naruto that or childish retarded nieve all around dumbass cowardly

awesome story,the only problem is powerscaling.

Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work

Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work

Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work

Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work

Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work

Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work