Reviews for Vanessa's New Wheels
Mystic Fairy Tame chapter 1 . 8/26
sweet, but my advice would be to explain to the reader what the slang ment as well, if it real.
taaMONey chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Great characterizations and spot-on dialogue; I can hear Ferb and Vanessa saying the words, which is awesome, as they both have amazing voices lol
kittenxxkisses chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
To be honest, I thought of the cracking to mean awesome, at first. :)

kat xx
I don't post here anymore chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
XDDDDD Too. Freaking. Cute! FERB KEPT THE STRAW omigosh that was SO adorable!
DominoTyler chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
That was adorable! Aw, I just love you're writing...
AmyNChan chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
that was so neat! *_*
DreamerInTheMist chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Wallace and Gromit!
Midnight4568 chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Once I read this story's description, I knew I was going to like it.

Yes, Ferbnessa is very inspiring, and different.

Lol! "Trampoline volleyfoothoopball."

I can imagine Ferb doing that. He definitely deserves bonus points for style.

Seventy-two days... that's like a little more than two months!

"Let off some steam with his brother and their friends." - By that, do you mean Ferb was annoyed at them or something? Or just burning their energy.

Haha, it's Ferb's "Vanessa Reaction."

Even Ferb's away notes are short!

That's my image of Vanessa's Perfect Car, too! Not the light brown sedan, the black convertible.

Lol, Vanessa and Ferb share musical interests.

What's Ferb's explanation of where the phrase "Cracking Toast" had come from?

Was Vanessa's colloquialism comment a compliment, or just a surprised comment?

I knew Ferb never liked Slushy Dawgs!

I think Slushy Dawgs are Danville's version of McDonalds.

Vanessa does seem like a chocoholic...

Ohh, I get why Ferb would order a cherry cola float. "...Ice cream cones and cherry soda, dripping down your chin." - Summer (Man, where do we begin?)

Haha, Doof WOULD overreact if he found out Roger had Vanessa as an employee.

Aww! I can picture Vanessa and Ferb feeding each other their ice cream.

Heehee, the brain freeze running gag returns.

Yeah, rosewood sounds better than light brown.

XD! Ferb would save a keepsake of Vanessa, even if it's only a straw.

Being good at blueprints, building things, and loving to read... That's practically THE definition of a genius!

Aww! Ferb is standing up for Vanessa, against her own reasoning.

If Vanessa didn't "rent" the scooter in Paris, did she steal it from a scooter renting place?

Amazing story, all in all! Please write more Ferbnessa stories. It would be funny if you wrote a story about Vanessa being in court, and Ferb being her defender. Like what Vanessa said after Ferb's speech.
crazymusicalgenius96 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Cracking toast, Gromit.

The Wrong Trousers is a staple in our household. )
00DeadAccount00 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
I like how you write the more "friendly" side of Ferbnessa, it's really fresh and playful. :)

Hmmm, could "cracking toast" be a reference to Wallace & Gromit? ;D
PhoenixWormwood137 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Hehe, that was really awesome :D I have no idea where you got cracking toast, but it's a marvellous name :D
patronsaintofdirtyfilthylovers chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
AWW this is sooo sweet! The straw thing made me laugh so hard! and Ferb was perfectly IC! Absolutely amazing!
Serenity12 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
I haven't read a lot of F/V stories, but this was incredibly adorable and seemed to be pretty in character. Really enjoyable read, thank you 3
Detective Rysposito chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
xDDDD so cute 3
BroadwayFanGirl91 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Hey, if I was in court... I'd want Ferb to defend me! lol

Lol, he took the straw with him? What's he gonna do? Smell it? Taste it? Sleep with it? Guess the options are endless. XD

I loved this, great job! I had a huge smile the entire time.