Reviews for Struggling
mistresssailor chapter 11 . 8/11/2014
Great story I just finished it. Great lemons Lol
karseneau1 chapter 4 . 8/8/2014
A good read
Mzmiami chapter 12 . 10/4/2012
great story
LuvingDBelikov18 chapter 10 . 9/9/2012
Lol dats was so sexy lol
GothSweettie chapter 12 . 6/23/2012
So a pretty good story for your 1st one. A little constructive criticism though. Try varying your syntex and sentence structure. Try not to have every sentence turn into a paragraph when you connect multiple sentences with and. This gets repetitive and takes away from the reading experience. As for your sex scene, I suggest reading a romance novel. Calling breasts squishy really shows your lack of experience. Try to find a different word to describe them. All in all a pretty good story. It just needs a little refining.
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 11 . 2/5/2012
wow! they really did forget something.

as for the story, i loved it!


keep it on!

LoveInTheBattleField chapter 11 . 2/3/2012
This story was wonderul and great ending.
serenityselena chapter 11 . 2/3/2012
interesting ending with Usagi being pregnant... Mamorus reaction to the news should be an interesting one _
wannabe kairi chapter 11 . 2/2/2012
love where this story is going love it
RKF22 chapter 11 . 2/2/2012
very interesting update a great cliffhanger cant wait for more
babybear010 chapter 11 . 2/2/2012
Omg its done I can't believe it I hope there a sequel
TropicalRemix chapter 11 . 2/2/2012
your ending the story there? Is usagi going to tell mamoru she is pregnant.
serenityselena chapter 10 . 2/1/2012
quite an interesting story _
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 10 . 1/31/2012
That was hot, please update soon.
RKF22 chapter 10 . 1/31/2012
great update loved it
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