|Reviews for Struggling|
| Oreo596 chapter 11 . 12/18/2017
I liked that~ thanks
| mistresssailor chapter 11 . 8/11/2014
Great story I just finished it. Great lemons Lol
| karseneau1 chapter 4 . 8/8/2014
A good read
| Mzmiami chapter 12 . 10/4/2012
| LuvingDBelikov18 chapter 10 . 9/9/2012
Lol dats was so sexy lol
| GothSweettie chapter 12 . 6/23/2012
So a pretty good story for your 1st one. A little constructive criticism though. Try varying your syntex and sentence structure. Try not to have every sentence turn into a paragraph when you connect multiple sentences with and. This gets repetitive and takes away from the reading experience. As for your sex scene, I suggest reading a romance novel. Calling breasts squishy really shows your lack of experience. Try to find a different word to describe them. All in all a pretty good story. It just needs a little refining.
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 11 . 2/5/2012
wow! they really did forget something.
as for the story, i loved it!
keep it on!
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 11 . 2/3/2012
This story was wonderul and great ending.
| serenityselena chapter 11 . 2/3/2012
interesting ending with Usagi being pregnant... Mamorus reaction to the news should be an interesting one _
| wannabe kairi chapter 11 . 2/2/2012
love where this story is going love it
| RKF22 chapter 11 . 2/2/2012
very interesting update a great cliffhanger cant wait for more
| babybear010 chapter 11 . 2/2/2012
Omg its done I can't believe it I hope there a sequel
| TropicalRemix chapter 11 . 2/2/2012
your ending the story there? Is usagi going to tell mamoru she is pregnant.
| serenityselena chapter 10 . 2/1/2012
quite an interesting story _
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 10 . 1/31/2012
That was hot, please update soon.