Reviews for In the Wake of What Follows
Aista chapter 38 . 9/22/2014
I don't have time to do a more detailed review but I wanted to let you know I've had a lot of fun reading this. The tension was built well and there was traction throughout. For the traumatic events involved it was appropriately emotive. I did find some of Terra's backstory/characteristics a bit of a stretch but when comparing her to Yusuke she's actually quite normal. There were typos and homonym errors but nothing a light editing wouldn't fix. There were also some points I felt that were unresolved, for example the issue surrounding Terra's grandfather (or was it great-grandfather?) as well as her research on the wish granters and how her wanting to be a demon would play out.

Overall, good writing and interesting plot. I can't help but feel the end came way too soon or maybe that's just my disappointment at the ending of a good story?
animelover56348 chapter 30 . 3/31/2014
Whoo lived it loved it lol
animelover56348 chapter 26 . 3/31/2014
I think I get went she's so upset aft the idea of fighting. She feels like the cause of so many deaths already the idea of deliberately doing it is unbearable. She just need the drive to protect and should be ok
animelover56348 chapter 11 . 3/29/2014
I greatly appreciate Terras perceptiveness. To be honest someone who was in a world of demons would need it to survive.
animelover56348 chapter 2 . 3/29/2014
Well written and seems very interesting so far. Excited to read more
Evelynne chapter 14 . 3/19/2014
It's pretty good so far! Just catching a writing error. I think you forgot to fix the sentence where Kurama was telling Terra she'd get sick from being outside. You wrote "you'll catch sick."
xXxCrimsonXAshesxXx chapter 38 . 3/11/2014
Wow this story has earned a place close to my heart. It evoked so many emotions in me and I really appreciated how true you kept the characters. Thank you so much for creating something like this and I would thoroughly enjoy some more of your stuff involving Hiei.

Cheers,
Crimson xx
animeluvr99 chapter 38 . 6/19/2013
Man I loved this. It wasn't too lovey covey and stayed true to everyone's characters
MidnightGenius chapter 38 . 5/15/2013
I have to say that this is my favourite Yu Yu Hakusho fanfiction ever. I absolutely adore Hiei, and really feel uncomfortable pairing him with any of the characters that exist in the show, but most OC fics are ridiculous, poorly written, and have very poor characters. Yours is none of that. I really felt you kept the characters true to themselves, which is important to me. It's also a story that could happen, and is well written! I even cried several times :)
This story is beautiful and I love your writing style here. Personally, I would love so much to see more of your writing with Hiei 3
Jello
MyLifeInWhole chapter 38 . 3/15/2013
Awsome!
WolfsSlave chapter 38 . 11/15/2012
OK as far as the story it is currently 5:51am and I love this story so much. It made me cry on more then one occasion... I really hope that you continue this plot and do another story off this one. I would love to read more about Hiei & Terra! And not only them but I wanna know about Yusuke's and Keiko's kids. I wanna know about Yukina's twins... I wanna know about Hiei becoming an uncle. Point is you have drawn me into this story so deeply I can honestly say if I had the power (and copyrights) I would pay you to make this into a freaking book series XD
PLEASE continue or at least allow us (readers) a Epilogue?!

As for the spelling and such the only thing I saw was a few sentences in each chapter that were missing a word...

Kinda like "The annoyed her but... etc... missing kid or something like that. Now I really must be heading to bed but I will be more then happy pointing them out if need be tomorrow (or today tech...) if you would just remind me in a PM :)
TrebleJazz chapter 38 . 10/19/2012
OH MY GOD IT'S ABOUT FREAKING TIME! Just, kidding, I actually love the pace you took this story at. Not to mention the humor you throw in (I believe the term, "Mother fucking ROUND TWO!" comes to mind?).

Keep writing, because you're awesome!

-Jazz
Lilia1998 chapter 38 . 9/15/2012
WWWAAAAHHHH
ITTTT EENNDDEEDDD
WHYYYY
but im still happy :3
Love the story
Lilia1998 chapter 36 . 9/15/2012
You made me laugh at the end xDD
I can't stop reading now sooooo imma continue reading 8D
it's 3:11 a.m right now ;w;
Nyxiana chapter 38 . 8/28/2012
Loved the updaaaate but there's so much left unanswered :O
I need mooooaaarrrrr 333
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