Reviews for And We Thought There Could Be Peace
Cheer chapter 5 . 1/8/2013
Do u actually know Greek?
Hungergamesfan654877 chapter 9 . 6/2/2012
Hhhheeeeyyyy. School is over. Anyway great chapter and everything,but I wish you would add anabeths( I know I spelled her name wrong) POV. Also I saw the Mark of Athena cover and WOW I really like the Heros of Olympus covers over the Perc Jackson cover. in my opinion I guess Percy and Jason fighting make sense. It show that roman and Greeks still have resentment towards each other, or Percy and Jason could be tricked to fight each other. Either way we won't know till we read the book . Cant wait for Tito come out. Probably the longest review I've ever written. Maybe see you during the summer. Bbbbyyyyyeeee
junebug98tx chapter 9 . 6/2/2012
Hey! I really like that chapter. The fight scene is really good! (Plus you mentioned me in your intro:)

I have a title suggestion: Percy.

Ya. Just that. It doesn't give anything away, so it might work. On the downside, it doesn't seem very creative...

Whatever. Your call. Can't wait for the next chapter...(No pressure)

SW
junebug98tx chapter 11 . 4/24/2012
Awww! Can't wait! :)
Piano player3 chapter 11 . 4/24/2012
Work hard in school so u can get your computer back! Then u can update!
junebug98tx chapter 10 . 4/19/2012
I was just wondering:

Does Paul work at the school?

You talked about how he had seen Nico and Annabeth "cuddling" so I wasn't sure if he worked there or not...

~SW
Hungergamesfan654877 chapter 10 . 4/17/2012
oooookkkkk so since you say my reviews are no help to you at all I will just critize you since you said that helps.

List of things that are good and bad

1) I am really starting to hate the percy and Thalia Dynamic

2) I wish you would show how Annebeth is feeling about this whole thing

3) This is the idea for your new title Life is just a bundle of suprises or Why cant life be simpler or Normal I am starting to question that

4) The story is very well written

5) YYAAAYYY good for you no misspelled words

Song iam listening to: More Than this by ONE DIRECTION

Update soon Great story
asdfdghjmkl chapter 10 . 4/15/2012
Update soon or i will personally come up to you and nock you out.
junebug98tx chapter 8 . 4/15/2012
Wow. Major twist! (Even though you had told me about it) 2 things though:

1) You might want to consider having Percy trying to hide his tears until he gets to the lockers? Just a suggestion.

2) You may want it this way, but it's a little fast paced. I don't mean to be mean, but Percy just lost "the love of his life" and he seemed to get over her pretty quickly. You may have wanted it to be like that though.

I love the dream. It was a great way to incorporate some of the elements of the original books into these new ones. Really enjoying reading all of these! :)
junebug98tx chapter 2 . 4/15/2012
Great descriptions! My critique is that Annabeth always came across as tougher than that to me. (Although I can see how she might be more emotional around Percy because they are dating.) Just something to think about if you want. :) Really great story line, though. I especially liked how you said "The flirt drip off my tongue." gives a really good visual!
Booksmusiclove chapter 9 . 3/26/2012
Go editing ... STAARS ... UPDaTE
Booksmusiclove chapter 8 . 3/18/2012
Ok your chapter title says things happen for the better or the worse well i am unsure about that. I mean the Percabeth and Thalico dynamic was like ruined in the Chapter, but for the fans of PercyxThalia and NicoxAnnebeth well then things happen for the better. Wow I wonder how they will get themselves out of this one... Wait maybe that Godess person that gave Annebeth the drink is evil. Then it makes kinda more sense or not depends how you see it. Ether way this is a GREAT chapter plz update soon
Hungergamesfan654877 chapter 8 . 3/18/2012
Ok so sorry I havent updated in a while but I gotta tell you something not the best chapter you have ever written it's is good but not the best I am saying this because in this chapter you annebeth and nico together and Percy and Thailand then made them god ummmm Indont understand because last chapter they In the consular office ether way update soon
Enchiladas chapter 8 . 3/17/2012
I'm kinda confused at the moment but that's ok I usually am:) anyways ur rite, never would have expected umm what do you call it anibo? Idk annabeth/nico. Oh ya I think the lady that talked to annabeth in the dream was Rhea!
Booksmusiclove chapter 7 . 3/15/2012
You might say yay to cliffys but your readers yell whhhhyyyy... Ether way I still think a cliffynis great way to end a chappie makes the reader crave for more Great story and chapter update soon
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