Hey! Great story! Keep up the good work!

this was a cute chapter. I love how quinns being all nice to her.

I think your writing is pretty good but the things you could work on is...

-maybe a little more passion between the characters? I know i cant say much because my stories lack this aswell... But what do i know im just like 14 and know nothing about LOVE.

- definately making the chapters longer ;) this story is awesome and it would be great if there was pages and pages to read!

I really like tbhis fanfiction so far... Hope you write more amazing stories in the future! ;)

I like her mom.

Her brother sounds like my brother right now!

Is her brother playing CoD? jk.

Good chapter!

Isnt it the northern lights?

Oh well the compliant was still so sweet.

Cant wait to see what will happen on saturday!

Interesting start thus far. Keep it up.

oh my god. This was really cool! I completely love foster the people so it was great for u to add that in :) write more asap. :) thanks for writing such a good story.