Reviews for A COLA'S tale: An orb took my friend Chapter 2
Guest chapter 11 . 10/23/2013
Do you know where this is going? Good job so far. Please continue
Guest chapter 7 . 10/23/2013
ValkyrieVeela chapter 11 . 5/5/2013
Little bit fast-paced. I wouldn't have dived straight in, I would have led up to the mystery itself a bit more after settling her in. By the way, when they're telling Georgia about the True Eleven they don't mention Clive and his presence at COLA Club; surely that would be as much of a key thing to know at Fenton Lodge as any thing else chronicled in 'The Shapeshifter'?
x-ema-x chapter 11 . 3/22/2012

x-ema-x chapter 6 . 1/22/2012
love ove love ittt!

im guessing the next chapter will be called 'brace for impact' ?

but how is he the ONLY cola to have got a vision about that?

i mean seriously 1 out of 170 odd colas? im amzed Lisa didnt pick it up

cant wait 4 the nxt:P
x-ema-x chapter 5 . 1/22/2012
Wowzaz! I love it! Do cola-ish! Theres new shapeshifters too! Awesome!
x-ema-x chapter 4 . 1/20/2012

Can't wait for the next one!
x-ema-x chapter 3 . 1/17/2012

Now its getting all cola-ey

This I'd the only fic I remember that it says the bit before they come AND the first one to have a slightly more common ability, rather than shapeshifting or pyrotechnic-ness or another Rome with no name

P.s. Thanx for the PM love them!

P.p.s. Keep up the good work!
x-ema-x chapter 2 . 1/13/2012
Love it!how oftten do you update?

can't wait whenever it is:PPP

great story!3
x-ema-x chapter 1 . 1/13/2012

coooool telekinetic:PPPP

isnt the sound of taps turning on in your head then passing out the sign of a shapeshifter as well?