Reviews for The Greatest Story Ever Written
BlackSpire chapter 3 . 1/25/2012
I really like where this story is going. I have to say the chapters are way too short! I want to read more! .

Your OC could use a bit more character development in the fic, but then again these are still the early stages of your fic, so hopefully we get to learn a bit more about Flame Trotter's character, as the fic moves along.

Apart, from the occasional spelling mistake and the predictability of the fic in general at the moment. I don't see a whole lot wrong with this fic. So I'll be keeping my eye on this fic!

Yours Truly,

Tj-Mcpony chapter 2 . 1/22/2012
Very cute! I predict rainbow/twilight showdown at some point.

Pony pony chapter 2 . 1/22/2012
Yeah it's good. Starting to think the mane 6 are going to be competing for this colt
DERPY chapter 2 . 1/22/2012
Oh no! Drama! Let's see where this goes
mlp Nightwolf chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
love it can't what for the next chapter. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
I'll keep reading. Little more detail please and keep up good work.
bearie chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Makes me want to cry... Great story though, cant wait for next chapter ;)