Reviews for Simple Things
ClawBronze chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Aw I liked it. I think you've captured all the characters personalities, even Sirius and James even though they weren't in the story. Your writing is easy to understand for someone who haven't English as their first language(me) and you did a great job with the dialogues. You also described things really well except for the environments, that you need to work on a bit.

Hope more from your "hidden files" come up soon.

Love