Reviews for Too Far
Crystal chapter 4 . 8/30/2017
Love you fanfiction plz update and continue write
You are an amazing writer
Guest chapter 4 . 8/3/2017
Oh god... Please... When have the time... Please more chapters
Guest chapter 2 . 8/3/2017
I'm not crying, I just got something in my eye.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/1/2016
This makes me hate Silas even more lmao
Krissygirl chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
Totally unexpected. Alot of twists and turns. Which is awesome. But Raf dies. Sick. :'(
Rookblonkorules chapter 1 . 2/16/2016
Yikes! That's dark.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/13/2015
Please continue, do not stop.
RatchetLover chapter 4 . 9/5/2015
Plz more soon
UNKNOW399 chapter 1 . 8/26/2015
plz update i really want to know what happens
russianwinter013 chapter 4 . 8/8/2014
Very emotional, very touching. Makes you think about how bad some people have it, how bad some are.

I am going to sit in a corner, close my eyes, and cry. And pray that this never happens.

But it was a GREAT story! Sequel?
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
i hope you are doing ok by the way Merry Christmas
DarkWind13 chapter 2 . 9/15/2013
This is such a creepy story so far, you put a lot of details in. This is one of the best horror fanfictions I read so far.
Starfire201 chapter 4 . 3/2/2013
Grief and trauma recovery (be it emotional or physical) does not follow a timetable, no matter whether either is the kind that affects directly or indirectly. I still cry when I think of what happened in CT, especially since I have a close relative about the age those children were. It's so easy to picture that little girl in those children's places even now. I'd call shame on those who were pestering you myself. I was kind of surprised to see this update, honestly, remembering what you'd said.

As for the chapter, it seems to me like things are going to be far worse whan all is said and done, and this is going to damage their relationships with the 'Bots for a good long time to come, if not forever.
TheChippedCup chapter 4 . 3/3/2013
In a fanfic, I would usually say "great chappie! Love it! Update soon!" Or something along those lines. But...I can't say that with this. It would be so wrong to say that for this...

You're an amazing writer, everything is very well written, don't get me wrong, but I...the emotions from this...the psychological and physical pain from these children is's horrible to think about.

If you cannot continue with this, I totally understand. It isn't very easy to write about this kind of stuff. I will not ask you to continue, and will not plead for you to update. To the people who do ask and plead, think for a moment: How would you like it to be writing about such gory things? Manipulating and totally crushing children's hopes of rescue, of survival?

To those people, I can only say that you are sick and twisted for asking someone to do that.

That is all.

Asher Tye chapter 4 . 3/2/2013
Still as frightfully well written as I remember. A gut wrenching experience. Your writing talents serve you very well. I do so hope Raf survived, though based on the description of Chapter two I am unsure. It's the nightmare his character induces being so close to the battlefield. Given what Optimus did to Megatron when the Decepticon Lord only "almost" killed the boy, one wonders what will happen when that semi catches up to Silas.

On a personal note though, despite my desire to see this to the end, if writing this is causing you grief, particularly with people "demanding" you continue, I would suggest just stopping. In the end this is a hobby and if it is causing problems for you, then it doesn't really matter what anyone else wants.
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