Reviews for The Three Heirs: Prologue revised a little bit
ToQuoteShakespeare chapter 1 . 2/27/2016
But Thalia is a hunter of Artemis.
PJOHPHGlove chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
This is awesome. Of course Percy would ask Annabeth to marry him. Its required by LAW. Okay. Thats all. Bye! Great story.
darkhairandgreeneyes chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
It's good so far :)

A bit of constructive critisism: its a bit short and jumpy, like there is potential for a lot of content, but youve got annabeth really mad at percy one moment then hes proposing to her the next... not exactly romantic :L

so you could draw bits out a bit, show more of their emotions for a longer time maybe?

Also, I ship Jasiper (I reckon Reyna and Leo might get together hehe) and I just cant imagine Nico with anyone.. least of all Thalia what with her being a Hunter :L but thats just me being picky haha

But the idea is good, it would be interesting to see what Percy would do if he chose to become a god so look forwards to that :)
Apriline chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
It was good, just don't like one little thing I'm TEAM PIPER jajajaja :)
little librarian chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
That was seriously amazing! It made me sooooo happy when Percy proposed! I have one suggestion: you could put the thoughts in italics so you don't have to do the 'Percy thoughts:, Annabeth:' thing. Unless you like doing it that way.
Aguilita chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! HAHAHAHA...hahahahaha, lol, EPICALLY FUNNY! I loved this! Continue!
Mythology Rose chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
This looks cool so far. I can't wait to see what you come up with.
NitemarWalker chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Reyna what about Piper
booklover484 chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
I loved it! Hope you update soon!1
PJatOFan17 chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
Good story so far. I'm glad you made Percy and Annabeth engaged. I'm a total Percabeth shipper:) please continue this story
Katie-Lyn23 chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
I liked it it definately makes you want to read more
XyLeNceR chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
so far so good and seriously, you should continue this. _
PplusAforever chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Hades NO! BAD! How could You sa that! It Is AWESOME! UPDATE SOON!
Lucky ducky chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
I like it so far but I thought it was Jason with Piper.

Keep it up :)
Clow Reed-GONE chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Huh. This was interesting I guess
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