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| Rose Eclipse chapter 12 . 3/7
Woah, love the twist you put into the story! Everything about this is awesome. I loved it!
| Rose Eclipse chapter 9 . 3/7
Poor Sam! Dean's little discusion about Jesus tickled me pink.
| Rose Eclipse chapter 8 . 3/7
So awesome to use the paper trails and I enjoy reading the little spats between the brothers as they text. Just the thought of them working in a preschool makes me laugh but it was touching through Colleen's POV how Dean is perceived by other people. A preschool is the last place I think he'd be okay working in, but then again, Dean's inborn skills could be put to good use! And love the kids calling Sam a "giant"!
| CarnivorousOak chapter 12 . 9/18/2012
Hats off to you! This is a fantastic story. I love the 'paper trail' format that tells the story and the way it really lets you get into the character's heads. Little details like Dean texting during his observation day add in all of the little personality quirks that make the show itself enjoyable.
| pandora jazz chapter 12 . 9/17/2012
You did a wonderful job of wrapping up your story. :)
It was nice that Renee realized that Dean and Sam rarely get thanked for being the heroes.
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
I enjoyed reading it.
| zekeschance chapter 12 . 9/17/2012
Loved the outsider POV! Great job!
| Madebyme chapter 12 . 9/17/2012
What a beautiful ending! You really tied this fic up neatly.
I loved how through reading Renee's journal we got an even broader perspective on what happened in the school. You've done a wonderful job in picking the right POV for each section.
I liked too Renee's comments about the boys being unrecognised heroes because that's exactly what they are and also how she wanted to thank them but didn't get the chance, I liked seeing the flip-side of that argument.
I've thoroughly enjoyed reading this refreshing fic and I hope you're planning to write more soon. Take care, :)
| emebalia chapter 12 . 9/17/2012
I can't say how much I love this story. Sam and Dean, the secret heroes, I like that.
And kudos to you for the work you put into this.
| StarryTwilight chapter 6 . 9/16/2012
"Have patience,young grasshopper." LOL!
| StarryTwilight chapter 5 . 9/16/2012
"Oooooo was she cute?"
"Dean, she was in her 40's."
| CarnivorousOak chapter 11 . 7/22/2012
This is fantastic. I love the notes-and-messages format and the new plot twist with the ghost(s).
| Madebyme chapter 11 . 6/11/2012
Oh what a spectacular chapter, full of twists and turns.
I think you did a marvellous job with this journal entry, capturing Colleen's stream of consciousness and her slow acceptance of what is happening.
I thought the section where she was possessed was brilliantly written; very clear and insightful.
What a wonderful cliffhanger too! Looking forward to more. Take care :)
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/11/2012
What a wonderful chapter! :)
I love how you wrote Dean and Sam. You did a wonderful job with their voices. I also had to smile when Colleen wondered where Dean had hidden his shutgun, '...didn't even know where it came from or where he had stashed it on his person...'
Colleen also noticed how Dean and Sam communicated with one word or just a look. Excellent!
This scene was a perfect example. "Sam!" Dean called, and his voice hadn't been so much a command as it had been a signal. It called to attention, yet again, just how 'together' the two of them were. It was I found something and come check this out and I'll cover you and be careful all rolled into one three-letter word.'
You did a wonderful job of describing how Colleen felt while she was possessed and also absorbing the memories from Nell.
I really enjoyed reading this chapter.
Thanks again for sharing your story with us.
Until next time, take care.
| R-Gomeni chapter 11 . 6/10/2012
Absolutely amazing update. I loved the storyline; the idea that the wife was the only thing standing between her murderous husband and the people in the schoolhouse and is now gone... kinda reminds me of the Provenance storyline from Season 1, which I thought was one of the more creepy ones. Anyway, looking forward to the next update.
| supernatfem76 chapter 11 . 6/9/2012
It was interesting to view Sam and Dean's hunting through Colleen's eyes. I liked your word choice throughout this chapter. You did an excellent job describing what being possessed would feel like. Colleen's possession provided an excellent way to tell Nell's story. Very nice twist at the end. I definitely did not have trouble following what happened in this chapter. It picked up nicely from where the previous chapter left off. I can't wait to read the next chapter.