Reviews for Harry and Luna Against the High Inquisitor |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story. There are not a lot of good HarryxLuna fics out there and yours is one of the best. I can't wait for you to update again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, You have a delightful story. I've enjoyed reading each and every page. You didn't simply repeat book five, scene for scene, which is a relief. I was wondering if you enjoyed assembling a novel-length tale, as all of your other posted story appeared to be 20 pages or less? Here's hoping that the words for the next handful of chapters come easily to you. Old-Crow |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, It's not a big deal, but your story would be somewhat easier to follow if you included day of the week with your date, ie Tuesday, march 6. We know it's '96, so that is really only needed once at the beginning of a story to confirm it's a fifth, sixth, or seventh year story, or if a substantial amount of time passes. O-C |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, Your interview scene was excellent - the best of it's type that I've read. Well told, Old-Crow |
![]() ![]() ![]() its good to see that the minister doesnt buy into umbridge's madness fully |
![]() ![]() ![]() its standard for fiction, but the relationship is progressing very fast, its far from the worst offender ive seen though |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay for reasonable authority figures! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it would be cool to see high inquisator malfoy, is a oneshot in order? |
![]() ![]() ![]() your pretty straightforward in the shipping, just dont forget that watching two character be happy isnt interesting without some drama and conflict |
![]() ![]() ![]() it always bugged me that the hallows werent brought up until the last book, i wonder how it will affect things |
![]() ![]() ![]() its good to see harry put his slytheren side to use |
![]() ![]() ![]() its interesting to see the villain's pov, i wonder what her plan will be? |
![]() ![]() Delighted to have rediscovered this. So glad to be rwminded of how desperately Umbrridge needa to be Set on fire and then defenestrated |
![]() ![]() ![]() post more chapters soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() An amazing read. I've really enjoyed this so far just like the I did the first story. |