Reviews for Harry and Luna Against the High Inquisitor
purplepuppy216 chapter 16 . 10/7/2016
I love your story, though I do wish that you would update...
xNaruHina chapter 9 . 10/6/2016
so none of Lunas memories with Harry were happy enough for Luna? Someone winning a game was happier than being with Harry? O.o Well done on the confessions, they were extremely cute and made me feel pretty happy myself.
xNaruHina chapter 8 . 10/6/2016
I like that Harry is finally doing something about the bullies. I was enjoying the commentary though so the fact that Harry made it stop is disappointing. Also, there really isn't much of a difference between sitting side by side snd leaning into each other than cuddling. obesity sideways abd one is laying down. both are intimate and not really something that you have to psyche yourself up for or to get used to the concept. If you snuggle than cuddling isn't much if a step at all.
xNaruHina chapter 1 . 10/5/2016
Eww, an umbitch centred chapter...
mauradette chapter 16 . 8/30/2016
Ohgoshilovethis!#keepitup
Jess Chen chapter 6 . 8/13/2016
Love the omake! :P
MADStar529 chapter 16 . 8/13/2016
So good.

Love the talk with Mrs. Weasley and Mr. Weasley for the boys. Very well done.

Luna would pick up on 'Polly' not being normal. Tonks could've researched it.

Update When You CAn. No Rush.
MADStar529 chapter 15 . 8/13/2016
Ugh, Umbridge has something planned.

Love that Harry's getting better at Occlumency. I can see Snape's pov about his lessons but there is no reason for him to act the way he does. He could have supplemental reading as well for potions.

Luna and Harry are still adorable and just so nice together.
MADStar529 chapter 14 . 8/13/2016
Fudge isn't too much of an idiot here.

Love Luna and Lavender's friendship, they're cute.

Neville and Hermione being better friends is great as well.
MADStar529 chapter 13 . 8/13/2016
Love to see Lavender's p.o.v and more depth to her.

Trelawney was drunk and love her answer to Harry.
MADStar529 chapter 12 . 8/13/2016
Love the Snape/ Flitwick confrontation. Very well done.

Dumbledore just being useless, pretty much. Nothing new there.

Harry and Cho's talk was interesting as well.

Luna and Harry are as adorable as always.
MADStar529 chapter 11 . 8/12/2016
Wow, they're really laying it on thick.

Umbridge is going to wind up dead one of these days.
MADStar529 chapter 10 . 8/12/2016
Really something's going to blow up in their face.

Malfoy's an idiot.

Love his friends reactions to Harry calling Luna love.
MADStar529 chapter 9 . 8/12/2016
Awww, so sweet.

Snape's a jerk, as usual. Dumbledore's not much help either.
MADStar529 chapter 8 . 8/12/2016
I liked Luna's commentary and hopefully Harry get's his dream sorted out.
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