I've really enjoyed your writings, and I'm glad to see another fervent shipper of Harry/Luna.

I am eagerly waiting to see what you have in store for Ms Umbridge, as I'm sure Harry, Luna, and company will have plenty of opportunities for mischief.

And as for your call for a beta, I'd be glad to offer my services, if only just to read the chapters before anybody else can...

Short, yet it's a prelude, so it's understandable.

A good piece of writing, makes us wonder what's next.

Although if you are going to write everything from Dolores perspective, it would get really boring fast. But it's just because I dislike her. (Like half of the world, really, as Rowling wrote her into the perfect amount of hatred potential.)

We need more Harry and Luna ;D

Good luck writing more, and now I'm already eager to see updates.

Nauro

I like where this is goong. Update soon! And perhaps could you by chance glance at my works of fiction?