|Reviews for Dain's Revenge|
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/19
Please do update
| Jasmine chapter 2 . 9/30/2013
| canagg chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
It's been a year since you last updated! C'mon! Add the next chapter already!
And it's turning out pretty good! Except for one part...
'D: Are you alright? You seemed very gloomy. Is anything wrong?
L: Yes, there is!
Lief shouted and ran. Doom knew something was wrong with Lief.'
He...just... asked him and he said yes... and then he goes and asks him what's wrong... AGAIN?! That... that makes no sense.
| canagg chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
It was a bit... confusing to follow. But I guess it's good.
| Archiepoke123 chapter 2 . 11/14/2012
Please make a new chapter. Plus the Heart vs. Brain was hilarious
| Kara kun chapter 2 . 6/1/2012
Finally a deltora quest fic! Ever since I first watchd it I wanted to read fics on it but there were none so please update soon
| TornadicDragon chapter 2 . 3/13/2012
I used to think Dain was really attractive... you know, before he turned evil. XD I'm so glad someone finally wrote a DQ fanfic! Hope you write more :D
| devious-heartless chapter 2 . 3/5/2012
The story seems to be interesting at first. But I'm not saying that it isn't now. I think it'd be nice if you could add more descriptions/paragraphs instead of making it look like a "chatbox" sort of thing.
Hopefully you'll be able to update soon... :D
| Heavenly-Charm chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
i really like your story cn u plz put more up
| May-tan chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Hey look a cliffy love it please update