|Reviews for Midnight Temptation|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
You all do know this is copied, right? Word for word, actually, and the original was posted in 2009 under the same title. You can look yourself. I typed in midnight sun, narrowed the results to twilight category rated m and they actually appeared right beside each other. Not doing this to be rude, but I've written on here and had also had a story of mine stolen and copied.
Good story, kudos to the orginal author.
With time and effort, maybe you won't have to steal.
| Alterite chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Wow, imagine how different Twilight could have been with this Edward! Definitely not PG17!
I loved it and found very realistic. I could really see canon Edward there.
Thank you :)
| IamTheAlleyCat chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
I love this venture into Edward's mindset in Midnight Sun. I also loved how you went very OOC on him in the middle and yet returned to the canon-Edward at the end.
Beautiful and very hot.
Thank you for sharing.
| Canyaceme chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
This was so good. Too bad a few of you fanfiction authors didn't come up with Twilight first. It would have been SOOOO much more enjoyable! ;). I didnt receive an email notification for this O/S. I only found it after reading In Justice update. I usually go to the authors profile of my favorite authors to make sure I've read everything and there it was. Wonder what happened.
| austoz chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
At last! An author who can spell and write eloquently. Thank you, it was a pleasure to read your work. I will be looking for more stories from you.
Midnight Temptation is beautifully written, sensual and erotic. Fantastic!
| Annalamode chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
He's certainly a quick learner, I'd stay "asleep" too if I were her. Please continue the story. Edward's worship is delicious
| Alice's White Rabbit chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
This was great, Angela! I have been missing your writing since 'Through The Glass, Darkly' finished. I would love to see what Bella was dreaming through all of this. Must have been an incredible dream :)That was incredibly risky for Edward, but it certainly worked out well for both of them.
Looking forward to your new story when you get to posting. See you then.
| twival31 chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Great! I would love to see this expanded ... To see how ths experience would alter their path.
| Cassiakohn chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
I'm pretty sure i should be less thrilled with his actions but SCREW THAT i loved it! Somehow i just dont think i could be upset if i were her. he should TOTALLY try again and accidentally wake her up cus dayum that would be fun
| Shazzio chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Wow 'middlewife' !
I love this story. Ha ha, I was going to pretend it was the first time I'd read it but you gave me away :)
Thanks for letting me pre read it. It was a priviledge and a joy.
I will do it again anytime you like :)
You really are a talented writer. FF is better off because of you.
| frlarsson chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
Loved your story ) and Sneakyward following his urges,
looking forward to your new story,
best wishes, Linda xo
| Nonita chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
Loved it! Thanks!
| ohtobeyoung chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
| snoopylover60 chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
Wow.. Stalker Edward :) kinda kinky!
( do we get into the debate that this is wrong, on oh many levels?)
Just let him enjoy the moment..
He gets the girl in the end anyway.