|Reviews for The Final Denouement Of Suzumiya Haruhi|
| Fast chapter 10 . 2/17/2013
Ah this is an interesting story and I hope you continue soon
| Troglodytarum chapter 8 . 11/25/2012
Chapter 8: The way nagato said "entertain me."
I was done.
I had a very good laugh. Well done sir/mam. Well done...
| Troglodytarum chapter 4 . 11/24/2012
Intresting... I like this much better indeed. However I realize now In the original story kyon seemed... OOC. This kyon is OOC as well but along diffrent lines that don't really matter, nor do I care for. But the Uru in this story is diffrent, way diffrent. Or is it that now the charecters were always like this but the detail allows me to see the "deeper" parts of their personality's. like I said I'll continue to read and I like it as well.
| Troglodytarum chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
Although this story is 100x better and the detail is astounding. (The best analogy I can come up with is playing 8-bit Mario for a year strait on an old TV then playing BF3 all of a sudden on a high definition TV.) however I am disappointed it is just a rewrite. But as long as you FINISH it this time around ill be glad to follow it. And I like the little changes as well. Keep it up. And good luck.
| Troglodytarum chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Oh you did continue it... I feel stupid now.
That big ass review from before... Just pretend it dosent exist. TY
| Shioran Toushin chapter 10 . 9/18/2012
it is an instersting stoy, and as i view it Haruhi just sent Kyon into a VN/eroge-like veriosn of the universe, hanving said that, my inner fanboy must scream: HAREM ROUTE IS THE ONLY ROUTE!
ok, i needed to say that, lol.
| CrisTocK chapter 10 . 4/21/2012
great story so far good plot and character development hope you update it soon. if you need a year to update so be it. but amazing story
any plan for tsuruya? i love her
well waiting next update
| sweetlilsunshine chapter 10 . 4/11/2012
wow Im sorry it took so long for me to read this but this is still amazing. You keep outdoing yourself with each chapter
| Axel 1000000 chapter 10 . 3/25/2012
This is my #1 fave Haruhi Suzumiya Fan Fic so far. Please update soon, the suspense is killing me and atleast 95% of your readers. Please update soon? :)
| 2coolforyou chapter 10 . 2/6/2012
Im so glad I got to this in time, I got to the original one when it was already done, but now with this one I can enjoy it while you update(if you EVER UPDATE lol just kidding). If this one is as good as the other one because they are similar but not entirely then i know Im going to enjoy it. Also thanks to your original story i was inspired to write my own, but it's not even close to being as good as yours but thanks for the reading and the inspiration anyway
| lbongo chapter 10 . 2/6/2012
oh yes, go bronies
| gotonis chapter 10 . 2/4/2012
Well, I really couldn't find anything worth criticizing. You've done well up to this point with the rewrite, and I just want to say I personally would rather wait a while and see this go in a different direction than have these come out fast and be the exact same thing, albeit written differently. Your style does seem to flow slightly better in this one, so keep it up.
| sweetlilsunshine chapter 9 . 1/31/2012
Man that was hilarious! Especially Mori's comments at the end lol, I can't wait to see how Haruhi reacts to Kyon on the next day
| gotonis chapter 9 . 1/26/2012
It's strange how this is so similar to the other one, yet the small differences are enough to make it seem like something completely different. Granted, it's rather predictable, as the main plot seems the same, but it's still its own thing to a degree. I slightly prefer the way you handled Haruhi in this one, and enjoyed the reference to the one Steve limit.
I'm tempted to ask you not to make Mikuru cry again, but I have the feeling that the Haruhi-chan reference is unavoidable.
Of course, I'd still like to see the plot differ a bit more, including Fujiwara not using his alternate reality sister as a hostage, but it's not my choice to make.
Anyway, good job making this story actually feel like a different story. I'd say it may be partially an improvement in writing style, and it shows.
| SakuraDrops141 chapter 8 . 1/23/2012
Haha I can't help but grin this whole chapter! This was one of my favorite parts of the old story! Keep up the good work!