Reviews for The DemiGods meet the Cullens
madisonbookaddict14 chapter 10 . 11/20/2014
dont listen to her! just keep writing
Vicky Tzalachani log out chapter 10 . 5/13/2014
I think you teacher is wrong! Im not professional but i enjoyed your fanfiction! I hope you continue writing because you are good at it!
DogStar13 chapter 10 . 4/10/2014
I think your paragraphs can be a bit more legible, but tell your teacher she has no right to put you down, and that creative teaching does not include creative language and insulting.
I'm interested in reading your revised!
GilmoreGirls-OTH-2013 chapter 10 . 2/26/2014
Please Please update soon I really like this story.
DevilishlyFriendly chapter 10 . 8/25/2013
I think your teacher was too harsh. You have an original idea and your writing is better than several authors on this site. Yes, your writing does need improvement, but you needed encouragement instead of harsh criticism. I wish you lots of luck and if you want a random persons view on your work just send me a PM okay?
Gatchaman chapter 6 . 8/10/2013
Man your grammar sucks
MidnightGlows chapter 10 . 8/9/2013
That's a mean Creative Writing teacher, geez...!
ALLONS-Y ROSE TYLER chapter 10 . 8/8/2013
1. I hope you gave at least one of the Pinks a nice whiner.
writing skills are great but I'm looking forward to the rewritten version.
3. Tuns for posting it.
Leah Reid Whitlock chapter 9 . 7/27/2013
Please Update?
Please?
MizzPurpleRox chapter 9 . 5/5/2013
I love it
meghanstar66 chapter 8 . 2/16/2013
I WANT MORE NOW!
Guest chapter 9 . 2/14/2013
This is a great story, and I really hope you update again soon! Pleeeeeease! :)
pinkMandMlvr chapter 9 . 2/10/2013
update plez this is amazing
Alice Gone Madd chapter 9 . 1/11/2013
noo... more plz
Alice Gone Madd chapter 3 . 1/11/2013
hahahaaahhaha
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