|Reviews for Humoresque of a Little Dog|
| Peach the Hedgehog chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
This is a very interesting story! I think the way this was written was perfect, and it reminded me of the strange things that sometimes occur in Earthbound!
At first, I wasn't sure what this was supposed to be a crossover with, but it didn't take me long to figure it out. I never really played Nintendogs, so that was where I was confused for a brief time.
The writing in this was very interesting! I like how you had Jeff explain about the village and what happened when he got there. Very interesting read!
I do think I noticed one typo near the end. I am very well aware that in the original Mother, or Earthbound Zero, that Giygas' name was spelled as Giegue. However, I honestly think that the names are supposed to be same, if we go on what the name is in Japanese. So, I think that Giegue should have Giygas.
Aside from that though, this was a very good read! Good job!