Reviews for The Jinchuriki's Note |
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![]() ![]() When does Naruto meet ryuk? |
![]() ![]() Bro please update this story my guy this is a peak fiction you were writing bro please I beg of you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's to bad money can't buy everything. I would drop a few hundred to see this story to completion. But the author hasn't been active since 2014, so either they gave up writing, or they passed away. |
![]() ![]() OH, YOU PROVE NOTHING! |
![]() ![]() Honestly, this was disappointing. The story was intriguing until "the Wave mission" began, the character defined from the beginning became the cannon Naruto who abandoned all logic for his idealistic desires... in addition to the typical "talk no jutsu". Naruto didn't need to be “evil,” but Naruto's thoughts reflect him trying to fool himself. Also, it was demotivating to be promised a match that never came… (:C) |
![]() ![]() Such an amazing story,I wish you continued it |
![]() ![]() Just realized that sasuke and Ayame can’t go to Heaven or Hell because naruto made them use the Deathnote |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story I never Comment on these aslo Dont take the RFID chip |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohhhh, muy interesante, muy interesante 10/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy... Man I really want to see shikaku stuttering his reason again after this... Too bad this is abandoned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I only read NaruSaku fics (for some reason. I mean, I don't even give a shit about romance.) But if this has no focus on the pairing then I will probably read it. P.S. I love Death Note |
![]() ![]() ![]() honestly I would have made it look like a serial killer on the loose that has mo but can't be killed |
![]() ![]() this is an awesome depiction of me. THe best i've ever read |
![]() ![]() ![]() por qué eres haci continuala |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say this is the most amazing story I've ever read |