|Reviews for Lost|
| choccy.x chapter 28 . 11/26/2013
| Guest chapter 28 . 11/16/2013
| kurtis.carnachan chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Hey there, i just wanted to say aweaome book , u should become an author one day!
| ioanna.hearts.you chapter 27 . 8/20/2013
Not a bad story at all, I have to say. Besides the whole Russia-thing we don't get much about Dakota's character, but she's still pretty believable. Just try not to base every time that she gets angry and does something wrong on her trauma, because her personality doesn't get developed. Still, it's a really good story and you've stuck with it, the plot is interesting and you've managed really well to time it to The Fall without ruining the original book's storyline or something like that. I like it that Dakota has her own story but that she's friends with familiar characters and they are actually not that far from how they were originally, so a big thumbs-up there.
I don't understand why you're not continuing the sequel here but okay, that's fine too! I really hope that her struggle with PTSD continues, and the the whole number-thing gets sorted out, because I was really curios, was it only the blood clot or did it have something more to do with Russia?
| ioanna.hearts.you chapter 8 . 8/20/2013
Oh she deserves to go spastic, you deserve to write it if you want to, and we deserve to read it because stuff like that is fun.
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/3/2013
photographic and eidetic are different
| xBlackFairiex chapter 27 . 4/7/2013
Really good :)
| KayKay06 chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
WOW. This was great! I love your writing!
| icanneverfindmyname chapter 27 . 2/4/2013
eep im so excited, wait have you written it yet, im gonna go look. AHh this was so good ive been glued to my laptop for about an hour just reading and I haven't finished the hw due for first period tomorrow and its ten o'clock, it was worth it though!
| choccy.x chapter 27 . 12/14/2012
thanks for the cliffhanger luv you for that :(
| choccy.x chapter 24 . 12/14/2012
much, much, much better than vampire diaries sorry I keep going on about it but I am depressed by what the writers have done, and we have to wait till after Christmas before we find out what happens next
depressing and sad looks on all the characters ... except for Elena who has the brother back I won't say any more than that I don't want to spoil the episode
anyway back to your chapter I like Sam I am glad you did not put Dakota together with James or Bruce but out of those two boys I like Bruce more.
| choccy.x chapter 23 . 12/11/2012
an excellent chapter
nice life and death situation
| choccy.x chapter 22 . 12/11/2012
It's swimming costumer over here." Kerry said. - exactly what I would say ;)
I don't like Bethany either
I like your comment about being hairless can't wait to see you bold ha ha
| Choccy.x chapter 21 . 12/3/2012
Love the cliffhanger!
| Choccy.x chapter 20 . 12/3/2012
Good chapter a bit gory at the end though