|Reviews for Those Three Words|
| flipped08 chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP
| Jiani chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Your writing style is really captivating You quickly got me interested in the story
Please update soon C:
| kittykaittt chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
:-) I really like this.
| IpizzippyReads chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
OMG! You have to continue this! I think it's gonna be great.
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
I really want you to continue. Your writing is amazing!
| GleekingSam chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Your writing is excellent! Please update this story.
| iridebrooms chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
woah, you're amazing. It's like reading the book! you should continue.
| JessLovesBrasil chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
great so far :)
| alltimelowmaria chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
thats really good! you should post more!
| Areias chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
An interesting start :)
Looking forward to more.
| carmencielle chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
Cute premise, great story, good potential... Update soon!
| Lahiwe chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
This is a good beginning-I like the direction the story is going in, and I hope you decide to continue it further! However, Bryce seems a little OOC-mostly because of his inner dialogue. He uses big words and complex syntax, like this:
"I was dead, in both a literal and figurative sense."
It doesn't sound very much like the same Bryce who would say "Lynetta was pissed," "Buddy beware," "scoop a chicken coop full of poop" etc. Bryce is smart, but he probably does not read as much as Juli and therefore his language isn't as sophisticated. However, you have him and Garrett characterized really well, and the issue I stated above is easily fixed. Again, waiting to read more!