|Reviews for All His Fault|
| loveislouder94 chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Short, but a well written and enjoyable piece. The only obvious thing I could think to criticize would be that you begin so many sentences with 'but' - changing some of those may improve the piece as a whole. Overall though, very well done! :)
| LukeAndLorelai Brucas Fan chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
These two... Love 'em! Miss them too. Very much. This was great too!
| ThisLoveHasNoCeiling chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
I really enjoyed this, especially as a duo piece with "All My Fault"! I think it'd be interesting to read them side by side/on the same page, since they're structurally similar-almost the same thoughts (with opposite opinions).
Anyway, I just love the way these work together! I love the dual perspective, because you get into each character's head and Remus does a good job in "All My Fault" of arguing his position.
I also loved the semi-choppy sentences; for some reason the way it reads is really powerful.
Great job! I love the way you've captured Remus and Tonks through HBP; short but dense! I'd love to read more from you for this pairing if you ever got the chance!