|Reviews for freefall|
| Savanah Rose chapter 1 . 5/8
Nice take on the story. I like your last line.
| shadowkat678 chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Oh my gosh I have freaking chills right now!
| Spyre of the Wolves chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Wow. I've red Divergent (Me being one, Erudite to Dauntless), but that was incredible.
I am selfish. I am brave. And I am free.
| A chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
| Hannah the Scribe chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Oh my gosh Rowan how did I not know that you wrote for Divergent before this?
I always wanted a good fic about Rita/her sister. I like how it wasn't just this scene, but it had good setup too. I honestly can't remember, despite /just/ rereading it, if the fact that Rita was Dauntless-born was in the book or not, but either way I liked that it was here; it seems even more wrong that out of everyone, it was her sister to die if she'd been prepared for that jump.
Very haunting, gave me the chills, building up to the end. *shudder*
So, nice job.
| Lostliveson4eva chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
I was scrolling through the stories in this fandom when I saw yours and was like, "ROWAN WROTE A STORY." Then I got really excited because I finally found one I wanted to read and so then I did. And yay. Anyway, I found these mistakes:
You put: "it's surface."
There shouldn't be an apostrophe.
And in: "the trains floor"
There should be one in "trains". Because it's the train's floor. Yeah, cool.
Same with: "the figures head"
Otherwise, it was perfect. Good job, Rohan. I enjoyed reading this. Youz did a very fine job, Miss.
Okay, I'm going to stop now.
| Doc chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Now that I've read the book, this makes a lot more sense. Huh, who woulda thought?
I couldn't find any spelling or grammar mistakes, so.
Me gusta. :I
See? I'm garbage with reviews. But I liek ur storie Rowaaan.
| scorchedtrees chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Oh wow, and I never really gave Rita and her sister a second thought. You made them real, good job. :)