|Reviews for The Last One|
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/27
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/11
Evolt:Oh how curious timeline.
Virus 404:This will great
| Write Your Wrongs chapter 9 . 8/11
He’s a pussy in this chapter
| Hinate chapter 30 . 5/18
Good job... thank you
| yourfoxydope chapter 5 . 4/19
I can’t keep reading this shit
| yourfoxydope chapter 4 . 4/19
what a fucking shit
why the hell would an S-Class ninja be beaten
u must just delete this shit-story
| yourfoxydope chapter 3 . 4/19
| alsdjhfgljkwebgh chapter 4 . 3/23
Right... Konan.. getting beaten to death by civilians...? Are you retarded? Yes, you are brain dead
| Ariadne Venegas chapter 1 . 2/15
Do you remember that Konan is older than Kushina and Minato? So she is like 45 and Naruto is 16
| Guest chapter 30 . 2/5
This was a really good story, well balanced! Can’t wait for the next part. I hope life is better for you now, you are a talented writer!
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/18
This is awesome!
| GloriouSin chapter 8 . 1/3
His hair changed orange and he is unhappy. But at the same time he says orange is his favorite.
Also... "He was basically the only blonde headed boy in the entire leaf village so it made him happy that he wasn't like the others."
Well except all Yamanaka ;p hell rewatch first scene of Naruto in school, there is like 5 other blondes... blonds goddamit why do you write blond-E like its french or something ;p
I literally only skipped chapter 1/3/8 through just to see if this is worth reading and i can already tell someone just wanted to write another story in naruto and it wont make sense at all ;p
| Fan chapter 1 . 11/7/2022
Nothing in canon implies that. If Nagato really had that power, why would he look like a skeleton? Btw Konan and Nagato are 35 in canon.
| N chapter 30 . 10/10/2022
I’m glad you didn’t make Tobi Obito. Konan would never forgive Obito like Naruto.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2022