Reviews for The Last One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice love the story keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Konan . . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() “innocent shinobi” lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not against the orange hair but it makes it feel like Naruto is just a replacement for yahiko in the still building relationship between him and conan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to know how far are you willing to write the story because Naruto still has a bit to go yet since the Fourth Shinobi war hadn’t started, and that is a big apart in the conclusion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back, my good friend! Glad to see you're able to continue writing. And this is a great start to what promises to be a grand ending to this story. Looking forward to the next installment. Also, any chance of "Naruto: Blank Page" getting an update? As much as I like this story, I like Blank Page even more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One would think adding the element of Naruto having the Rinnegan would make changes to canon. (Naruto deciding to randomly take a break when Sakura is going after Sasuke and dying doesn’t change things in a positive way). |
![]() ![]() Loveeddd this new chapter! |
![]() ![]() Your naruto is pathetic, even compared to cannon. Nice eye powers, let's make naruto a little bitch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! Man oh man! Am I glad that you were able to get back to this! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t wait to see how this all goes and ends |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice work I look forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() it finally updated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, great chapter - can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() November 12th still no update. |