Reviews for Unexpected |
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![]() ![]() ![]() doesn't really address the whole Annette thing, as far as everyone at kaleido stage is concerned, Annette was his girlfriend then fiancee. for him to sudden show up up sora would nake things spin out of control. really should've done more than one sentence about it is all I'm saying. rest was good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, I don't know what to say. I had two exams today at UNI, and I wanted to sleep when I got home, 'cause I was really tired and exhausted, but instead of that, I found your story. I was like: Okay, why not? Just 2 chapters before sleep and I'll continue tomorrow. Well, here's 1:01 currently, past midnight.. And I finished your story. It was beautiful, I couldn't put it down. I loved every part of it and you even made me cry. The ending is perfect.. It's been a long time since I read a really great story. Thank you so much! Loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is she serious? OMG TELL HIM. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved reading this story! Sora/Leon is my favorite pairing for Kaleido Star! I loved how you wrote this story! Keep up the great work - I look forward to seeing what else you come up with~! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH POR DIOS! AME TU HISTORIA! es tan hermosa! emmm traduce esto, mi ingles es muy malo cuando intento escribir... Saludos desde México. |
![]() ![]() Perfect absolutely perfect! I nearly cried lol... Thank u for ur story |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay. Thanks for writing this up. sweet. LOL write more alright... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful your fic! Always loved Kaleido Star and development that you gave to my favorite couple was perfect. Congratulations, I loved it, please continue always like .. Kiss and Happy New Year. PS: I'm Brazilian, so please disregard the bad grammar / spelling, because I'm reading / commenting on your fic by Google Translate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I nearly cried ... The ending was beautiful. The story was really well written. My romantic heart was going to explode! So silly but soo perfect! Thanks for sharing this amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umm, wasn't the show she saw with her parents Alice in Wonderland? |
![]() ![]() ![]() well done mate! i would have written reviews for every chapter but then i couldn't be bothered, i just couldn't get enough of the story! i had this story bookmarked for a long time and i regret not having read this sooner than i should have, and this is my first kaleido star fan fic too! i love this! hope to see more from you! you're one decent writer! |
![]() ![]() I started to read your story a few hours ago and I have to say, I can't desist now! The development of your story is intriguing and it absorbs the reader completely, making you feel as if you are watching every little scene, I am completely mesmerized by it! Fantastic job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was absolutely beautiful, and I love that Sophie can see Fool - good future ahead of her for sure! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I really want to read the rest if this cool fic just to see Leon's reaction to with Sora. Offically favourited! |