|Reviews for Relentless|
| Blue night fairy chapter 32 . 4/19
Great chapter! I would really like Hermione to find out about the bond or at least start to realize all is not well. Maybe she should express to Severus how much she would hurt if anything ever happened to him. Or Hermione could fall asleep in Severus presents and forget to take the dreamless sleep, Severus then having to wake her up, Hermione admitting she is still having the same nightmare dream every night and telling Severus it's him in her dreams, Severus realizing that it's the bond and he need to tell her.
I hope something like that happens. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. It's kind of hard to believe that Hermione hasn't tried to research why she is having these dreams in the first place. Anyway I hope we find out more soon.
Keep writing and update soon. I only leave long reviews when I'm really like a story.
| Isabel chapter 32 . 4/19
Great chapter! Please update soon. I really hope Hermione finds out about the bond soon. Keep writing.
| Sassyluv chapter 32 . 4/11
| SevvieLuscious chapter 30 . 4/8
PLEASE LET HIM SAY THE COMPLETE TRUTH OF THEIR SITUATION
| SevvieLuscious chapter 30 . 4/8
Wait I don't understand, WHY he doesn't tell hermione right away about their condition, IF he wants to 'save' her from himself? I mean the time is ticking away, and it just doesn't make sense. He has decided to walk away from her, so telling her about their condition won't hurt what they had. Why is Severus being uncharacteristically unproductive? I'm so anxious about the bond because he won't do anything about it, he won't even tell Hermione about it, and he doesn't attempt to try to find out about Hermione's nightmare. I believe like everything else, prolonged and continuous use of Dreamless potion is not healthy too.
| SevvieLuscious chapter 25 . 4/7
Ginny is so annoying duh, just stop making Hermione do your work, just let her have spaces for Godsake. It really annoys a private person like me to see a friend like that.
| Hanable-13 chapter 32 . 4/5
ugggggg severus... hermiones gonna find out about his.. half truths and shes gonna be annoyed and THEN whats he gonna do? ugg
| Zalia chapter 32 . 4/5
Great story; come on Severus, blurt out the bond so Hermione can slap you in the head for being so stubborn. :)
| villafoo chapter 6 . 4/4
Loved their interaction in this chapter!
| villafoo chapter 5 . 4/4
I'm curious to see how Severus reacts to this news :P
| villafoo chapter 4 . 4/4
Nice chapter :)
| villafoo chapter 3 . 4/4
Chapter 3 was fantastic! The interactions between all the characters were fun to read :)
| villafoo chapter 2 . 4/4
Enjoyed this chapter very much!
| RhodaBush chapter 32 . 4/4
| Thorn chapter 32 . 4/4
I just join your very long story, thanks for writing it.
I'm perplexed by how the bound is working.
Why does "neglecting it" mean?
Why is the buzzing fading with time, even during the time he's pushing her away?
I would have thought that like the one evoked in cannon (by Dumbledore about Snape and Harry's dad), a "debt" is something you can repay, and I thought Snape would find a way. He's trying, but I thought he would try harder, like thinking that finding the Cure would be it, or deciding to go to Australia and fix Hermione's parents. And the Healer seems to think only the ritual could work, not once acknowledging how dangerous it is.
I hope you will tell us more about it in the next chapters.