Reviews for Harry Potter and the Secrets of Truth
Sakura Snape-Malfoy chapter 12 . 11/12
Just wondering a couple of times you put that Gabriel had green eyes in this chapter but in the rest of the story you said that he had obsidian eyes like Severus? Great story so far. I look forward to reading the next chapter even if it is the last one for this story.
wendylee chapter 13 . 7/1
This is a great story! I loved every word of it and did not want it to end!
Guest chapter 13 . 3/6
So was Sirius black still in azkaban? What about the horcruxes won't voldy still be able to come back? Also is Remus in the order?
Kaerith chapter 13 . 3/10/2013
Good story!
spk chapter 13 . 1/5/2013
Gabriel's speech at the end stirred my soul. :)
YeCatsJ chapter 13 . 11/12/2012
Another fabulous story. Great job.
adafrog chapter 13 . 7/30/2012
Great story, thanks.
sjrodgers23 chapter 13 . 1/24/2012
loved this stor sequel to this story please thank you
EvilDime chapter 13 . 1/20/2012

I have a few points of critique, albeit I enjoyed the story overall.

One is the general perfection of Gabriel/Harry. He is too powerful, can do too much. There was never and doubt that he would win and live happily ever after, which takes away a bit of the excitement. The second point is an issue of consistency: I believe that in the previous chapter half the praesidium were killed, and yet a the end, they are all of them unharmed. Finally, one thing grossed me out: Draco kissing Gabriel while the mage still has Voldemort's blood dripping from his lips. That's just... yuck. ;D

Still, I enjoyed the sight of vampire-veela-Harry going all out, wings, fangs and all. It's a rather beautiful picture. So I guess there are some advantages to super!Harry, as well. ;D

- Dime
Lana.G chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
I hate to sound ungrateful, cause I am indeed thankful that you have placed two of your amazing stories back onto the site, but I was hoping you would upload those that are not on your yahoo site first. Or maybe put the stories that you haven't redone yet on the yahoo site? I just love your stories and would realy like to be able to read them once again.

One of your faithful readers that will continue to read regardless: Lana.G.19
Mrs Suzy Black chapter 1 . 1/14/2012

This is one of my fav stories of yours D

I'm so happy you put it up here again D

THANKS *hugs*
LifeIsJustADreamForTheDead chapter 13 . 1/14/2012
Such a beautiful story!
tommyboynv chapter 13 . 1/12/2012
It was great to read this story again. I so love your writing. Thanks for reporting.
thrnbrooke chapter 13 . 1/12/2012
I didn't want to come to the end! I wanted more!
Wicked Lovely 17 chapter 13 . 1/11/2012
loved it. :D
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