Reviews for In the Dark
Alexxis T. Swan chapter 3 . 8/4/2016
I think the plot could be really interesting! You should continue this!
Guest chapter 3 . 6/26/2016
I like it. Hurry and make more plz!
Reina chapter 3 . 3/6/2016
Gary and Carmen are so OTP 3
Songs123 chapter 3 . 2/1/2016
Can you please update this story is amazing
BlankSpacefilledwithBadBlood chapter 3 . 1/24/2016
I got so excited at this please update.
h0neybunny16 chapter 3 . 11/29/2015
i love them together 3 huge fan of them as a couple in the movie
can't wait to read more.
legend fanatic chapter 3 . 9/9/2015
pls continue soon
Guest chapter 3 . 6/10/2015
I love this write more
PerfumedWithObsession chapter 3 . 6/3/2015
Loved it! This fanfic is amazing! Please write more! Thanks!
Guest chapter 3 . 12/31/2014
write more. PLEASE! its so good
Tiffany chapter 3 . 9/13/2014
I loved it please please pleassssse I beg you tu uploaded more please?
RainbowHydra chapter 3 . 8/28/2014
pjato-lover chapter 3 . 8/15/2014
Please please please update this! I know it's been a very long time since you updates but I just hope you do, this story is too good to be left alone like this
Lalaland5634 chapter 3 . 7/30/2014
Hey! So... Is this still a lead up to the mission or what? I really like how you showed Carmen's morals, but I didn't understand the cake reference. Why did she not tell Gary about her mission? because I would have assumed, although top secret, they would be more open about how they might be randomly missing the next week... I love this so far though and I think that you have a great plot idea!
Thanks and please update soon!
Lalaland5634 chapter 2 . 7/30/2014
I liked this chapter, especially the part about how much of a field agent at heart Carmen is. A couple things confused me though- Why is their relationship a secret? What is the point of that, if they are engaged surely someone would have noticed the ring, and if she really misses her friends and family wouldn't she include them in her life more than that? I really liked the secret laser beam though- that is a neat trick!
Thanks and update please,
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