|Reviews for Forever Blowing Bubbles|
| sfjoellen chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
chris, it's so very brit! well done lad, well done indeed!
| VanillaMostly chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
They're so cute! Hahahahah
| ReillyJade chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Awww. Just awww. I absolutely adore the Luna/Dean ship and I really wish they got together in canon.
I love how natural this piece felt. Luna is somewhat of a difficult character to write, seeing as she's so...well, odd, but you've definitely given her justice here. Dean, too. None of the dialogue between them felt forced or structured. This genuinely felt like it could have happened in canon.
And what an interesting coincidence that a song that's so impeccably Luna is the song for Dean's favorite team! There's just something so innocent-sounding about it, so carefree, and that really suits the mood for this story. You tied it all together so well.
My lone critique is that the word "Muggle" should be capitalized throughout your story, but that's hardly an issue. It didn't take away from my enjoyment of the story in any way. Well done! :)
(And kudos on doing so much research to get this as accurate as possible. I'm American myself so I'm always doing research for my HP stories. I know how exhausting it can be. :p)
| HeadlessHuntsman chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
This is very well written has a quiet emotion. I have always be a Dean/Luna shipper as well as a Luna/Neville shipper. I though what you wrote was believable and the dialog seemed natural.
| Intervigilium chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Reading Dean's words about football reminded of the very first game I watched in a stadium...
This was EXACTLY what I needed. Thanks a lot, and congrats!
| Ember Nickel chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Great premise! (I looked up, and was amused by, West Ham's achievement for similar fic-writing purposes myself once so I appreciate the research. :p) Loved the "top flight" confusion, the idea of Dean Apparating to games while on the run, and the streaker note. I was expecting Luna to actually make a bunch of bubbles at the end, but this was amusing (if a little incongruous, was it mentioned that she knew who the rivals were?)
Anyway, awesome work.
| Il'Diko chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
So, while the football isn't really my thing, I liked this very much. You did Luna very well, she was just as extraordinary as in the books! Also, somehow she was perfect for Dean!
| aasiya333 chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Oh wow...love love loved that...especially the dean thomas insight and footbally-ness
It was written incredibly well and i really enjoyed the slightly different luna...and the end: "f*** millwall" amazingly hilarious...
| Bad Mum chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
That was bloody brilliant. I just love how enthusiastic Dean gets about football, and how Luna is really interested. Love the bubbles she's blowing too, especially the last one of course.
| Witherwings01 chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Sweet AND funny. How do you do that?
| Sara Winters chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
That is too cute. I LOVE Luna's story about the naked man. That sounds like the part of the game I'd have questions about, as well.
| Rose of the West chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
That's so charming! What a gentle, lovely way to describe them both and give them a chance to rest up before what happens next in the canon.