|Reviews for Chocolate Bar|
| cluelessclown chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Aw, this was really cute. I've always been very fond of Bruno and I think he'd definitely save a chocolate bar for Shmuel, but for nobody else. :) Really well done.
| MayaPotter97 chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
This was really cute to read. You used a great variety of adjectives and it all went so well, I loved it! :)
| Remy Styles chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
Really good! I liked it. I honestly don't understand why am I your first reviewer for this story, and I mean it! Your a really good author, and you've only got 1 or 2 reviews aside from mine...but oh well, talent's always hidden there until it comes out. I've seen you haven't updated in a while, so perhaps the lack of reviews discouraged you or whatever. I'd like to ask you not to leave because of that. You're quite good, and I'd love to keep on reading your brilliant stories.