|Reviews for My side of the world you'd never know|
| Rainbor123 chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Are you from another country? Because you might want to get someone to Edit this for you, most of the time I could make out the words because you just spelled them different, but a couple I have no idea what your saying. I suggest someone who has lived in America thier whole life.
Good Luck With That :)
| phantomwarrrior1 chapter 3 . 1/11/2012
Okay, this is a great story! But, it's kind of hard to understand. There are words you don't spell right, like "wud" should be "would", and "win" should be "when", and also you have run-on sentences, so you need more comma's when they're appropriate. It's not bad, but I would make those changes so people can understand what's going on better. It's really not bad! I like the idea! ;) You just need to work on your grammar and spelling a bit more, that's all. I hope this helped. )