This story is just as amazing as the last time I read it! Great job!

I really loved this story. I wanted Edward and Bella to have at least 2 more kids- but I love that they had a little surfer girl. :) This story was such a delight to read. Truly- I enjoyed every chapter. I didn't want it to end.

Thank you so much for writing this.
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Makenna has no chance of gaining custody because Edward has a girlfriend. None. But if I were Charlie, there's no way I'd be okay with my daughter coming in 2nd place with her man. She should be first. Period.

Ugh! This is the woman Edward chose to father a child with & spend the rest of his life with her? Doesn't show good judgement. He allows her to insult Bella. I don't think Bella deserves to pay for what she's done or should have to tolerate her antics. Edward needs to be clear with her; he doesn't love her nor want her & that will never change. Edward needs to protect Bella from the mess he's made.

Why did Edward divorce when he's so silly about Lisle? Why throw in the towel so easily & early? Edward seems impulsive -he marries in his teens? early 20's? Fathers a kid at 22? Was Lisle an oops baby?

This is REALLY unfair! He wants Bella to promise him forever before they've even been on a date?
An 18 year old girl to give up college, home, friends, career? To be with some one who didn't keep his solemn vow of forever? Someone who's told her she & any of her children will always be 2nd place to him? I hope she breaks his heart. He doesn't care about her.

Great story. Loved how you covered the time gap. Thank you for sharing.

Sounds like he loved MAK...soooo bellas has to deal with a kid, his divorce and maks fucking ghost...that doesn't seem very fair.

when they came together it felt like it was too soon, too easy. That's no fun

wait what? Bella is fresh out of high school...and you think a guy with a FOUR YEAR OLD and DIVORCED is the guy for her? UMMMMM FUCK NO

Hello - loved this story. Your Edward and Bella are so amazing. Wondering if u still write?

Thanks.

I love your story !

Thank you for sharing.

I enjoyed your story! So many red flags of uncommunication when they were young. I'm glad that they got a second chance!

I love long chapters, but I understand what you are doing with these short ones. I really like this story so far so thx for writing. Can't wait to read what's next!