Reviews for Going Under
Guest chapter 46 . 9/25
Great story. Loved how you covered the time gap. Thank you for sharing.
Guest chapter 19 . 7/26
Sounds like he loved MAK...soooo bellas has to deal with a kid, his divorce and maks fucking ghost...that doesn't seem very fair.
Guest chapter 17 . 7/26
when they came together it felt like it was too soon, too easy. That's no fun
Guest chapter 4 . 7/26
wait what? Bella is fresh out of high school...and you think a guy with a FOUR YEAR OLD and DIVORCED is the guy for her? UMMMMM FUCK NO
Debralynn chapter 46 . 2/6
Hello - loved this story. Your Edward and Bella are so amazing. Wondering if u still write?

kadronya chapter 46 . 1/11
I love your story !
liatb01 chapter 46 . 6/2/2016
Thank you for sharing.
LAB1 chapter 46 . 4/4/2016
I enjoyed your story! So many red flags of uncommunication when they were young. I'm glad that they got a second chance!
Atwiggs chapter 23 . 3/21/2016
I love long chapters, but I understand what you are doing with these short ones. I really like this story so far so thx for writing. Can't wait to read what's next!
Atwiggs chapter 6 . 3/21/2016
Atwiggs chapter 4 . 3/21/2016
Glad Edward is single again and that they are good guys!
Atwiggs chapter 3 . 3/21/2016
What a sweet little boy! And a very nice big boy!
Guest chapter 27 . 3/17/2016
Yes I can see the reason why Bella left because McKenna was a real b**** but in the long run McKenna won...Because Bella left him..when he could have gotten full custody
Texas Bottle Blonde chapter 41 . 2/29/2016
I'm so glad to have found your lovely story. I wish I could have joined the fun as you were writing each chapter! I've enjoyed your Edward, Bella, Lisle and Jaspervery much.
anafinchel chapter 46 . 2/21/2016
awwww I loved this story! read it all in one go! sad it's over!
It was totally worth reading! :)))))
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