Good concept. Dialogue was pretty well written. I thought the pacing was off. The conflict needed to be explored more. In the end, it felt rushed, not a complete story. He caved and took her back like nothing ever happened.

I love this story, every time I run across it, I just have to at least read the beginning, where they see each other after 10years, gradually the love they had then reappears.

Realmente não foi nada do que eu esperava!
Queria mais emoção ali
Edward sendo menos simpático com ela
Ok, ela foi embora por "uma boa causa" mas foi covarde e merecia suar mais pra ter de volta o Edward.
Pelo visto não será necessário...
Que pena

I’m rereading after soo many years and It feels new again.

My son is in college at UC Santa Cruz right now and now I picture Bella there.

This one will go into my favorites list. Sorry I didn’t review before. Not very good at that. I love your style of writing. You get straight to the point without too many useless words in between like some authors do. I will definitely check out your other stories. Thanks for sharing your talent and time with us 3

I would like to place an order for a T-shirt!

I think this is my third time reading this story and I still just get soooo caught up in this part. I understand why Bella did this, kind of, but I feel so badly for Edward who was just being beat on SO HARD in this part of the story. Losing EVERYTHING, all at once. Gah, my poor heart 3

Thanks for sharing, really enjoyed it! I would have liked to have read more about their relationship when they were older, but it was a nice change to read something written in this way!

Thanks a lot for the amazing story.

This story is just as amazing as the last time I read it! Great job!

I really loved this story. I wanted Edward and Bella to have at least 2 more kids- but I love that they had a little surfer girl. :) This story was such a delight to read. Truly- I enjoyed every chapter. I didn't want it to end.

Thank you so much for writing this.
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Makenna has no chance of gaining custody because Edward has a girlfriend. None. But if I were Charlie, there's no way I'd be okay with my daughter coming in 2nd place with her man. She should be first. Period.

Ugh! This is the woman Edward chose to father a child with & spend the rest of his life with her? Doesn't show good judgement. He allows her to insult Bella. I don't think Bella deserves to pay for what she's done or should have to tolerate her antics. Edward needs to be clear with her; he doesn't love her nor want her & that will never change. Edward needs to protect Bella from the mess he's made.

Why did Edward divorce when he's so silly about Lisle? Why throw in the towel so easily & early? Edward seems impulsive -he marries in his teens? early 20's? Fathers a kid at 22? Was Lisle an oops baby?

This is REALLY unfair! He wants Bella to promise him forever before they've even been on a date?
An 18 year old girl to give up college, home, friends, career? To be with some one who didn't keep his solemn vow of forever? Someone who's told her she & any of her children will always be 2nd place to him? I hope she breaks his heart. He doesn't care about her.