Reviews for Going Under
2loveybunnies chapter 46 . 6/5/2013
Aw, I really loved this story and read it straight through - and I'm sorry for not reviewing all the chapters. I'm really disappointed that you don't appear to be writing any more, because I think you did a great job with this and I would love to read more of your writing. Thanks for sharing this with us!
Marie Mermaids chapter 41 . 5/30/2013
aw... that was an amazing story. I am in love with all of them. And I got to learn about surfing. Thanks so much for sharing
Marie Mermaids chapter 17 . 5/30/2013
wow
Marie Mermaids chapter 6 . 5/30/2013
OOOOOOOOOOh... getting warmer
Marie Mermaids chapter 3 . 5/30/2013
I can't decide which one is cuter.
girlygirl0706 chapter 46 . 5/29/2013
I really enjoyed reading this story. Loved Surferward and Surfergirl. Glad I found this over at Ms. Swan bookstore (I think that's where I found it lol.)
girlygirl0706 chapter 32 . 5/28/2013
Okay since this chapter didn't end with a cliffy...I'll go to sleep now lol.
girlygirl0706 chapter 31 . 5/28/2013
Omg I can't stop reading this. I need to be sleeping and I just keep clicking next instead. One more just one more.
girlygirl0706 chapter 30 . 5/28/2013
Oh god. ...he said "please don't leave me ".
girlygirl0706 chapter 27 . 5/28/2013
And it's starting to come tumbling down.
girlygirl0706 chapter 19 . 5/28/2013
FINALLY! Edward is 26 lol. I was like okay already on chap19 and still don't know how old he is. She should have not said that cause she never knows what the future holds.
Guest chapter 46 . 5/25/2013
Totally loved it xxx
D 171 chapter 46 . 5/23/2013
I'm so sad
I wanted more
D 171 chapter 41 . 5/23/2013
Just a word...
PERFECT !
D 171 chapter 36 . 5/23/2013
Yes!
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