|Reviews for The Beginning of Our Bright Future|
| Jasper's Darlin' Kathy chapter 3 . 8/8/2014
OMG! I loved this. Embry is such a sweetheart. Yummy lemon too.
| Babysis64 chapter 3 . 5/15/2014
Thank you for sharing your story with us. Wow Embry and Bella went through some hard times cause of Jacob but they came though stronger and this is good. Now they are married and Bella is pregnant, wait until they tell the pack and Charlie is going to be a grandpa you once again, this was a really good story and have a good week.
| Babysis64 chapter 2 . 5/15/2014
Wow I can't believe what Jacob has done he didn't even care if he hurt Bella at all right. To hurt a pack mate and a imprint is a harsh penalty huh. Poor Billy has to be without his son now. I hope that Bella and Embry is going to be okay right.
| Babysis64 chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
This was a good first chapter, and wow Embry imprinted on Bella while she was walking with Jacob. Now she knows, but I guess they will tell her not to tell Jacob about the shifters right.
| ekr333 chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
loved it xx
| Lolabean07 chapter 3 . 6/22/2012
I loved it! Embry was the second wolf I fell in love with. Leah will always be my first! Then Paul, Jake, Jared, Seth, Sam, and Quil. The little ones...Brady and Collin, I'm not there yet. For some reason they just seem too young.
| Yeddi chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
Awww, so sweet. I love Embry.
| Mistress-Volturi-09 chapter 3 . 2/22/2012
Awh this was such a sweet short story. I'm happy Jacob finally learned the errors of his way and that Bella and Embry got to live 'happily ever after'.
| notashamedtobe chapter 3 . 2/21/2012
| NCChris chapter 3 . 2/3/2012
Well done! For a story that grew out of a oneshot challenge I thought this was really well thought out and I enjoyed beta'g for you, honey. Just remember that everyone has their own views on Pack behavior and reasoning, so what seems rushed or extreme to one is perfectly acceptable to another. Keep writing, it's how we all grow.
| Mrstrentreznor chapter 3 . 2/3/2012
seems pretty extreme to banish the chief's son... but I suppose he didn't give them many options... he's pretty OOC here, I guess. But they get their HEA... nice.
| Mrstrentreznor chapter 2 . 2/3/2012
surely Sam could have given Embry permission to speak to Jake OR Bella could have; there is no way he is going to take this well... he is the true Alpha; he has to phase
okay - so he didn't take it well... If Alpha orders don't apply to imprints, why couldn't he fight it when Jake made the order? I can't imagine that Embry would have taken that without arguing... was jake trying to kill himself?
| Mrstrentreznor chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
hmmm - so they told her about the wolf pack... before Jake? I guess if she is really an imprint... but it seems odd; i mean they know that Jake must phase; why wait? she seemed to accept it pretty easily too
| Robin.D chapter 3 . 1/31/2012
wow that was a good chapter :):):D:D
| i'm in the looney bin chapter 3 . 1/29/2012
Love it! Short and sweet, ups and downs but happily ever after :) x