Reviews for Intruder
goddessofolympia chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
As always, another great story from you! I love how you've described the team and given them all brief yet individual personalties. You've got Scarecrow's characteristics down (or as down as anyone who's not Matthew Reilly can get him) and also, I adore your writing style. With Mother interjecting her thoughts, that totally works.
Prototypicality chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
You're back!

There are no words to describe just how happy I was while reading this. SO HAPPY I SAY.

I laughed out loud through more than half of this. Thanks so much for making my day interesting!
KnightDweller chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
The thought of Mother having a penguin on her foot is making me pee myself. I love the new name for 'Snap' you came up with. Can I marry you? Your writing never ceases to make me happy.