|Reviews for Wilderness|
| Jasesmiles chapter 9 . 3/3
Awesome story! Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon! :)
| Nutt Man 117 chapter 9 . 3/2
I didn't realize that another chapter was out. Wish I reviewed earlier!
Naruto and Sakura having lots of sexy timez! :P luv it!
I wonder if that was Zetsu who took poor Sakura. How will Naruto know if she's in danger? :(
Can't wait for the next read :)
| How could you chapter 9 . 2/10
Oh my good glob.
| Iron Monkey Fist chapter 9 . 2/7
Well damn that ending.
| Iron Monkey Fist chapter 4 . 2/7
I really enjoyed this chapter. Quite a few developments occurring that I like. Well done.
| Iron Monkey Fist chapter 3 . 2/7
Your writing puts my own to shame. I can tell you've put in a lot of time and effort to get the characters just right, to have them develop naturally, and that you've worked hard to craft such an intriguing plot. I can't bring myself to stop reading.
| Iron Monkey Fist chapter 2 . 2/7
Another excellent chapter. Your characterisation in particular is very good and comes across as not only in character but organic and natural. That's rare.
| Iron Monkey Fist chapter 1 . 2/7
Very interesting first chapter. Looking forward to reading more.
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/6
Another wonderful chapter. Your writing is always a joy to read! This story has always had a strong sense of direction and it's enjoyable to ride along as it unfolds and see the sights as I go!
I must mention, since the beginning, the setting of this story has really intrigued me. I love the sense of isolation in the surreal setting of being in the belly of a giant toad, on the bottom of a lake, out in the wilderness. And the isolation leaves them no choice but to face their mission, the confines of the belly force them to take hard looks at their relationship too.
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/29
Hope you update soon!
| SomeDamn Author chapter 9 . 1/28
Hello there, my friend.
You are really REALLY good at what you're doing, and your stories are on a different level altogether. But, here are few of the things that I felt while reading :
For a story that deals primarily with emotions, this smashes that target easily. Your portrayal of emotions trumps just about anything I've read. However, when it came down to the lemon, Sakura seemed a bit inconsistent, and the story started feeling more like fanfiction. Why I say this is because the rest is too good to be called fanfiction, and please note that I rarely exaggerate.
Another thing you seem to be really good at is having the courage to actually WRITE your characters and what they would actually do in a set piece. Trust me, I've read many instances where the author just takes the easy way out.
And you have one of the most unique (paradox there XD) portrayals of Naruto.
So, my friend, do keep it up. I'm eagerly waiting for the update.
| ninaxw chapter 9 . 1/24
Amazing chapter, as always! Well, what I really like about it is the fact that we can see Sakura and Naruto become more intimate with each other in more ways than one. It's really interesting how they both seem to be aware of how the other person feels more or less, but they refuse to voice it. I'm not sure if you've avoided them talking about their feelings on purpose or you suppose it would be redundant. I'm kinda leaning towards the former because it seems that Naruto is still not completely sure how Sakura feels about him and how she feels about Sasuke. You can notice it in the way he tenses when she informs him that she needs to tell him something. He's still unsure. Like I said a lot of times before, what exactly is going on in Naruto's head all this time is a mystery to me.
The ending was surprising I must say. Although I knew something was bound to happen, you kinda lulled me in a false sense of security since they've been in the toad for so long and had practically no connection to the outside world. Oh man, I'm really really interested to see how Sakura's going to get herself out of this one. Something tells me Naruto might throw caution out the wind if she doesn't show up soon. I'm kinds rooting for her to get out of this situation on one hand because we all know she can and on the other because if Naruto leaves the toad they'll be forced to participate in the war and then who knows when they will be holding hands again let alone doing other activities. :)
| Silent Bunshin chapter 9 . 1/22
Damnit I just knew you were building to something like this! But hey, what is a story without suspense? I look forward to another great chapter soon. Thanks for a great update!
| ZapZapYotsuba chapter 9 . 1/19
| PinkBraid chapter 9 . 1/18
Good chapter. Everything was going well for them so it was time it went wrong. I was wondering if any of the story would really happen outside the frog because the same setting was getting kind of boring. But then I realized that was probably the point. Naruto can't leave so that's where they always are and readers feel the same boredom.
I love that Naruto is good at sex because he learns with his body. I've never read anything like that before. The end was a bad place to stop. Probably black Zetsu. Can't be good for Sakura. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.